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loved it update soon!!!!

Hi, Rain. I just love your story. I love it because you conbined the muggle version of a confussed woman with all the training and all the stuff you wrote. And also the passion she is sharing with Draco. I belive that you said that he was obssesed with her right? Well, I hop that you can update soon. I am the moderator of the group you have recently joined. I hope that we can have a little more information about your story in our group. I hope that you like it! And Welcome

Hi Rain! I just wanted to let you know that I am really really enjoying this story! I like how you are writing Draco and Hermione\'s encounters. Chapter 5 was my favorite...very hot! I am eagerly anticipating another chapter...so hop to it! Please?

I\'ll \"see\" you around on Lorett\'s 3Keys group page!
Ronnie

umm ... it\'s not really ooc for hermione to be drinking. Most people start drinking from about sixteen upwards. Although it would be difficult to get into a club, with out a passport or a driving licence, in london.
Also people don\'t bring electrical items to hogwarts because the magical fields interfere with the electrical fields and stop them from working. i\'m pretty sure it says that in one of the books.

apart from that this is quite good

**ok a quick pick up on one of my own mistakes- it\'s conceNtrated not conceRtrated**

Now let me set this staight. The drinking laws in europe vary because Europe is a CONTINENT!!
It is made up of LOTS of countries each with its own laws and most with their own languages.
The drinking age in the UK (united kingdom = Great Britain (or England if your really stupid)) is 18 years old which is the highest drinking age you will find throughout Europe. However most children - that\'s children in the legal sense ie people under the age of 18 - are given alcohol in small amounts at a younger age by their parents.

right ok got it
sorry about the computer comment in the first review. i have now read a liitle further. From now on i\'m going to shut my face and finsh this so that i can indulge my moaning side with out embarrassing myself.

and sorry about the uk rant i\'ve had a really bad day.

LOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!

i love this fic. i can\'t wait to hear more. i love your portrayal of hermione\'s character... she is still herself, yet incredibly sexy.
i also enjoy the interaction and tension between her and draco. please update soon... even with your so-called grammar
mistakes, the caliber of writing is much higher than 99% of the other stuff on this site.

nnt

THE BEST!!!! this fic is tops, love, utter and beautifully tops. omg.....omg....PLEASE write more? update sooner? make the chapters longer? I know I ask an awful lot of you but, *sobs into her hand* it means so much to me, to readers in general, to read a wonderful story about their favorite characters in love (not that they have admitted it yet...) but, you have to understand....its just soooooo great, wonderful!!! Is there a word that can express that delicious bubbly feeling in your stomach that fills your heart with joy, that sears your soul with its passion? its just.....so, so, so, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you for making my day, my week, my, month with your wonderful work. the nine have favored thee, and i do hope that they continue their patronage. blessed be the muses.
much love
eddie

I couldn\'t agree more about Ron. Harry is more suited for Hermione, so is Draco and they are better looking as well. I can\'t stand stories where people put Ron and Hermione together. I see a good premise and then they kill it by mentioning Ron/Hermione. The whole series is headed towards Harry/Hermione as a couple anyways