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No, his pulling her from the window didn\'t read as if he was afraid of their being discovered... at least to me. The fact that he remains half-nude only underlines that. Otherwise, I would think he\'d be dressing just as fast as she. I think you\'ve got Hermione\'s confusion written very well, and since you\'re writing this from her perspective, Draco can remain enigmatic without problem. We, the reader, are kept in the dark as well as Hermione. I do wonder why Dumbledore\'s warning to her hasn\'t bothered her more, but she might be so driven by her hormones and her confused reaction to his possessive/protective waffling that she\'s unable to think beyond that. I look forward to your next chapter, Rain.

This is the one of the best D/Hr fics I\'ve read. You\'ve managed to make their relationship so realistic. Though Hermione is a bit too beautified (but hey, it could happen in 6th or 7th year), I felt that your characterizations hit right on. I liked how you compared the Malfoys to the Grangers and though it was made up, I felt like Hermione\'s parents would really do that, after all, they are rich dentists and they want the best of everything for their daughter. I can\'t wait for more of this story soon. Hopefully more D/Hr interaction will come up. I want to see them develop a relationship of some sort because it seems like what all these past chapters have been building towards. Also, I think perhaps Voldemort will come into the picture soon. Of course, only you the writer knows what will happen next, these are just some predictions that I have (which could very well turn out to be wrong). Good job!

*Sigh* I must say, I am a HUGE fan of a possessive Draco...Please, go on...My only request would be for a couple of possessive Draco bits.

You shouldn\'t worry, it came through that Draco was hiding her semi-nudity from anyone else\'s eyes. They can be so possessive. Still loving it.

Once again a fantastic chapter. I really like how you write. The only complaint I have is that it was too short - again. :P Also, I think that though you explained Draco to be volatile, I thought that the way that he treated her after the bludger incident was a bit \'not him\'. In my mind, when Hermione was having a bit of a breakdown, Draco seemed to not care at all . . .

Other than that, that was lovely. Update quickly please. :)

Wow. Another GREAT chapter. Although it was a filler chapter, it was excellent. The plot and your writing style blow me away. Keep those updates coming.

grrrrrrrr......why did it have to end.
You are so good at writing. And
nothing is OOC. Please please update soon.
I plan to keep you in my favorites and reading
the rest of your works.

Love it, Darling! BIG HUG TO YOU!

And, I did get that he was protecting her. I thought maybe he was doing it in case the window broke with the bludger possibly coming back and hitting it, to keep her from getting hurt. But, I got it.

And, she\'s SO NUTS! She had Draco Malfoy between her legs and what does she do? She goes and gets dressed! Let\'s him kiss her and then let\'s him walk away!

OY! Crazy, nutty girl!

Anyway, filler is fine, have no worries. All I try and do if I have a \'transitional chapter\', as I like to call them; is to make sure that there is at least one plot point in the chapter to keep the story moving forward, however slowly it goes. So, that\'s my constructive critiquing. NO criticizing here, as you don\'t need it. You\'re doing very well and I\'m loving it! (Which you know!)

I\'m glad to hear that Ronnie visited you and left you a review. She\'s AMAZING and she\'s SO TALENTED TOO! She\'s a good person to have giving you a review, cuz she makes you feel grand and still manages to give you helpful info too. When you have a sec, you should read her story, over at FF. You can get to it through the links pages at the group.

So, this was a good chappie overall. Don\'t think twice about filler chapters, they have to be there and this one went down nice and smooth!

Oh and I have to say, the idea of Draco whispering in Hermes ear, asking her if she thought about him...touching herself?! WOW. Sent shivers down MY spine!

Looking foward to the next chapter!

Cheers,

L

Great Story!!!! One of my absoult favorites!!! Please update soon!!!

This chapter was just so damn exciting and entertaining I practically fell off my bed.

The idea of those two doing oh so semi-naughty things while a Quidditch practice was taking place, freakin brilliant.

Ah I can not wait for the next chapter of the this wicked story

rock on!