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Chapter 2

Hmm

Chapter 3

Oh I just love how Dumbledore knows everything. It

Chapter 4

What a visual! Draco in a library looking through the children

Chapter 5

Juheez I

Chapter 6

Oh Ron; poor, silly, slow Ron. He is so undeserving of Hermione. Good thing he won

Chapter 7

Oh Em Gee. This is one of my favorite chapters so far. Jealous Hermione

actually, the malfoy-moving-granger-away-from-the-window scene read more like him trying to protect her from random projectiles than anything else. to me anyway.

this chapter didn\'t seem as polished as most of the previous chapters have been, but i like it still. i like how quickly draco\'s moods change--it fits him--here largely because you don\'t make him look bipolar. i mean, no going from super aroused to insanely confrontational all of a sudden, just because of one comment. actually, both malfoy and hermione seem more complex and sane and three-dimensional in your stories than in many others for precisely that reason i think.

keep up the fantastic work :)

What a great chapter!
You made Draco so delicious in this chapter too.
Don\'t worry about your English and the slang it\'s great so far.
Can\'t wait for chapter 8 and more Draco!

Fallenrose x

I really do love this story! Hehe, it\'s soo good. I don\'t see how you could have offended anyone. I mean, it\'s obvious that you are American (lol, I can tell cuz I\'m one too^_^), and probably don\'t have as much knowledge of the British as I\'m sure all Harry Potter fans would like, but you work beautifully with what you have. Screw anyone who has suggested or will suggest otherwise. This is one of the few *really* good stories on Adult Fan Fiction that I have had the pleasure of reading. (And, even though this story is also in regular Fan Fiction, tha\'ts alright. Lol.)

Waiting for your next update!

~Cheers~

Loved the update! Can\'t wait till the next one. ;)