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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Rain, I loved the new chapter. Very good ideas on the organization of Hermione's movement. Can't wait to see the continuation of the dynamics between Ron and Pansy. And, I don't understand why Draco doesn't enlist his help with Pansy's addiction? Surely it would be something Ron would be willing to do, and it would help with the inter-house unity thing. :D
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love love love love this story. Def. one of my favorites. Please update soon!!
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!!! Please keep writing. I've missed your Draco and Hermione.
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!! I'm so happy you've updated, I really enjoy this story. I really like where you're going with this Rain, and I want to see if Harry and Ron confront Hermione on her newfound relationship with Draco. I also wonder if Draco and Hermione will tell how they feel for each other. Great chapter!!
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!! thanks for the chapter! ron & pansy!
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you go girl. standing up to that old fart. hahaha!
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the way you portray Hermione in this story. She's so in character. I think S.T.O.P. is a brilliant idea because its so exactly something I can see her doing. There is no way Hermione would be standing by idly, especially not after being attacked the way she was.
I love Draco too, he's just perfect and he also never seems out of character. The way you write him, I can easily see him being draw to her, wanting to save her and protect her.
The Pansy taking drugs/sleeping with Ron is also a really original and awesome twist in the story. We really know so little about Pansy from the book I can totally see her having a difficult home life and resorting to drugs. I love this story so much, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!! I'm dying to know what happens next!
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RRK
I love Draco too, he's just perfect and he also never seems out of character. The way you write him, I can easily see him being draw to her, wanting to save her and protect her.
The Pansy taking drugs/sleeping with Ron is also a really original and awesome twist in the story. We really know so little about Pansy from the book I can totally see her having a difficult home life and resorting to drugs. I love this story so much, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!! I'm dying to know what happens next!
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RRK
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here I am! What a great start to a potentially great story! I'm intrigued enough to keep reading, so YAY! :)
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your characters may be OOC, but it's quite fun to read just the same, yeah? So don't apologize! It's your story, and we're all quite happy so far, I'd wager!
I knew the instant Hermione stepped outside that she was in trouble, though I thought it was a bit confusing how Draco saved her. Have you considered separating the sections at all?
LOVE that Draco was the one that saved her. He really is walking a fine line here, isn't he? So glad Hermione's parents were not hurt, and I'm thrilled you have friend!Harry here too. Off to read your next! :)
I knew the instant Hermione stepped outside that she was in trouble, though I thought it was a bit confusing how Draco saved her. Have you considered separating the sections at all?
LOVE that Draco was the one that saved her. He really is walking a fine line here, isn't he? So glad Hermione's parents were not hurt, and I'm thrilled you have friend!Harry here too. Off to read your next! :)
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please come back, I can't wait to see how this story ends!!!