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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying your story so far. You have a good grasp of writing which can be rare in fanfiction. My only recommendation would be to watch your spelling on things like \"strait\" to \"straight\" and such. I know these are easy mistakes to make so please don\'t take that as a critical remark. I also love your Draco dirty talk; it\'s just terrific! Please update soon.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good stuff good stuff!!! i luv yur draco/hermione fics and i\'m dying for you to update your other one (aka jealousy)
keep up the good work!
keep up the good work!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GRRRRR...... you had to leave it there. I had forgotten I had read this story.
If you could, e-mail me when you update again. I am definitely going to have
to keep my eyes on you. Update soon.
If you could, e-mail me when you update again. I am definitely going to have
to keep my eyes on you. Update soon.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"...It rocks or something.\" Ha, yeah. I\'m really digging the story and the plot. Update soon please.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It definitely rocks. I like the whole thing with the complex issues.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DEFINITLY ROCKS! I have been waiting with bated breath for ever for this story to be updated. I absolutley love it! it is one of my favorites on this site!!! It was wonderful i loved how draco acted at the very end of this chapter, awesome! PLEASE update soon!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It totally rocked! I was very happy to get your e-mail that you had updated and I was not disappointed when I read it. I have been let down recently by the fanfic that had been popping up, so it was a welcome read to get your update. Still great!!! I can\'t wait to see where this goes and if you could update soon (writer\'s block hopefully leaving you alone), I would be soooooooooooooooooo pleased.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love love love love love this story! Draco and Hermione are just....such a conundrum. I dont know if thats the right word, but hey, it might work in that context.
The last few lines about Hermiones death and funeral....brought tears to my eyes. It was so beautifully written!
Im glad to see you updated and I hope to read more, soon!
Mo
The last few lines about Hermiones death and funeral....brought tears to my eyes. It was so beautifully written!
Im glad to see you updated and I hope to read more, soon!
Mo
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! i really like your story and the way that you\'ve shown the relationship between Draco and Hermione but i think that maybe his \'powers\' on her are just a bit too unrealistic. like kissing her makes her do anything he wants and she stops being angry etc. i think it would suit hermoin\'s character better if she wasn\'t so helpless against him. it isn\'t like that in real life anyway.......nevermind how good he is. Update soon, you\'re a good writer!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank you thank you thank you!!! I\'ve waited what seems like an eternity for an update!!! I was crying at the end of this last chapter!! Oh please update soon, PLEASE??? This story is one of the best that I have read in a long time. It\'s heart wrenching and moving and I just can\'t wait for the next chapter!! Use this as influence - you are an excellent author with a kcik-ass story, and I am so not the only one that thinks that.... Keep up the good work :)