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by brandnewdaydawning

person M M
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely my favorite Draco fic. Even after HBP I haven\'t given up on Draco, or Snape, and this playing both sides fits that theme. Its well written with good character development and awsome sexual tension. Write more soon.
person selene
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is briliant! I adore it! I hope that you plan on updating soon! I know that I have some gall asking for an update so soon after you posted an update... lol. But what the heck... I am greedy for more!

You really depict both Draco and Hermione is such a beautiful way... rounding them out and giving them motive for their actions. Great job and thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
person katie
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh! this is fast becoming one of my very favorite stories! ohhh! cant wait for the next chapter!
keep it up cause i\'m hooked! :)
person anonymous
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!! i cant wait to read more!
person jadering
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered your story today, and I absolutely love it! I like the direction you\'re taking the characters into, and that there\'s a point to why everybody is doing what they are doing. You don\'t stick scenes in there just because you don\'t know what to write...you actually have a point. Great job! Now where\'s the next chapter? ;)
person Joanna
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep! She continued! Brilliant & thanks a lot...I DO like it more and more...please don\'t wait that long again *g*...
I like the \"problems\" you created...poor Hermione & poor Draco...hope to hear more soon, okay?!
person Narcissa Black
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, when you talk about possesive Draco, you don\'t fool around. Breaking Harry\'s ribs, hiding Pansy\'s drug use; he gets around. He is protective of her, he cares about her, but don\'t be surprised if there is howling in the hills because he has a chauvinistic attitude towards her. Yes, she is a big girl and can take care of herself. But there is always that small part of every woman that wants a strong man to take care of them. You can\'t fight genetics. I can\'t seem to help reading the entire fic every time you post a new chapter. I was supposed to have a new chapter out tonight. Somehow blaming you might not go over well. LOL
person twisted3ljw
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have never reviewed on this site before, but I have been reading on this site for many months now. This chapter was probably one of the best chapters of a story I have ever read. Some of the lines you used were so powerful I got chills reading them. If this is what I can expect from the rest of your story, then I believe I may have a new favorite fanfic!
person Stag
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far, I am frapping loving the possessive Draco. Please keep that up. :)
person Ivy
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been keeping up with your story please please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!