rate_review Reviews

wkd update- thanx soooo much 4 updating again!
but can we plz c more possesive draco action? He\'s soooo flippin hot! best draco characterization ever! well done! :D

this is awesome...i love how you portray draco...his character is so deep, but most people only see what\'s on the outside...i love how you bring out what\'s inside... and i don\'t think your portrayal of hermione is really that ooc...if she was assaulted, as she was in your story, i think it would definitely prompt her to learn how to defend herself, in one way or another... all in all, i think this is a great piece of fanfiction...your writing style is so attention-grabbing...you really bring out the passion between draco and hermione, and it\'s not punctured w/ major grammatical errors and ooc dialogue like many other stories on this site... update soon!

It\'s brilliant and I envy you once again... rock on!

Please, PLEASE keep updating this story. I am totally addicted to it! And update quickly!!!! Thanks!!!

I am very impressed with your story, although the characters are not totally in keeping with cannon you have made their actions very believable. I also love the way you have made Draco\'s focus Hermione and not had him switch over to the good side so easily.

Can\'t wait to read more!!

Just quickly: in the beginning of the story when Hermione is talking about her mother, you might want to change the spelling to mum instead of mom as this is the english way of spelling it :-)

Wow, I\'m looking forward for the next chapter.

hey; well, yeah, this rocks!! I love how real the story seems; and how much thought you\'ve put into fleshing out the characters. Keep it up

Everytime I read your work, it blows me away. Your talent and beautiful way with words leave me, no pun intended, spellbound. You have a gift. It is a great and rare thing, develop it. Hone it. Blow away the world like you blew away me. Please don\'t wait as long to update this. HBP should not distract you....this story is much more preferable to JK Rowlings cannon. Malfoy and Hermoine forever. May the Nine shine and never leave you wanting again.
much love and devotion from
Eddie

Must. Write. More. I would love to think this is how Malfoy is underneath the sneer. Since HBP, Malfoy has changed in my eyes. He was always sexy, but now he has more depth. In the book he showed intelligence, hesitation. I can see that Hermione will soon be at the end of her sexual rope, so to speak. Draco has now left her unsatisfied numerous times. Granted, I don\'t think she was quite ready for full-on sex before now, but I believe she has reached her limit. I look forward to reading the rest of this story. It is refreshing to come across talent such as yours, Rain. I do hope to read more from you soon. May writers block never exist for you!to

good stuff, keep it up