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Usually, it\'s very hard for me to find a fic I like. Soemtimes things are much to short, or far to long. I like being able to sit down and catch the whole thing in one sitting, and hate it venhemently when things end and aren\'t finished.

You\'re story was 8 chapters, fairly long and as of now unfinished, however it is thankfully still in the process of be updated. It\'s taken me two sittings to read up to this point due to work, sleep and plain lack of time. However, I throughly enjoyed every word. I found myself beating my boyfriend originally for losing my webpage of your fic, and then diligently setting out to find it in the morning. It\'s difficult to find a captivating Hr/D fic simply because of how oppisite they are. Thank you for writing this, and for being as talented as you are.

I will now indefiantly comment on all other chapters that you write, and I look forward to reading them. Remember to take your time and rush for no one. Genius takes time. :) Muses like chocolate, air conditioning and lots of love.

I can\'t wait until chapter 9!

~S

Awesome! You\'re an excellent writer and you kept me very engaged in the entire plot. You\'re absolutely correct - this is fan fiction and you don\'t have to stick to the rules - rock on and keep up the fabulous work. Your HG/DM stories are some of the best!

OMG...I just realized that that was the last chapter u.u... I am sooo into this story, so please update as soon as you can.. I am truly enjoying it ^^.. Could you please e-mail me and tell me when you update? Thanx.

I love this story! It is very original and the awesome plot brings life into the sotry. You are really good at creating new aspects to the characters. This is soooooo awesome. Reading it brings me into an entirely different world! Thanks soooo much!

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Just wondering if you have an email list or something that can tell us when you\'ve updated?

Amazing story. I was so disapointed to come to a last chapter. Your story is obviously well thought out. I\'ve enjoyed every moment so far:)

Wow, I have really enjoyed your story... it\'s a different twist on the typical fanfiction Draco, and I like him a lot. This is honestly one of the best stories I\'ve read in a while, and the first time I ever felt compelled to review. I hope you will continue with this one, because I look forward to seeing where it will lead. Thanks!

Please continue. It\'s great!!!

Your story is awesome! I read way too many fanfics for my own good, lol, but your is one of the best. The characters are realistic and well-developed and the story itself is very intriguing. Me like! :-D

i\'m really enjoying your fic so far. i admire you tactics in revealing information without forcing the characters to talk through every niggling detail. for example, ron\'s mental diatribe on hermione\'s self-defense made it blatantly clear that while he may admire her abilities, there is no way he would probably ever be able to confess his (pissant) feelings for hermione or accept her as a woman of strength in a romantic setting. another example from about the same time in the story is draco\'s casual comment on how hermione never used to run. it such a subtle touch that conveys that yes, he has been paying attention, he has been watching her, he knows her habits and schedules and this is in no way a new thing. his rant in your latest chapter saying something like, \"ask me to die for you, ask me to kill for you, but don\'t ask me to help put you in harm\'s way\" (i suck at paraphrasing) it really sounded like someone obsessively infatuated with her. not inlove, because i don\'t think loving someone as grounded and upright as hermione would require such desperate actions, (although they\'re great in hyperbole-_-) but honest to goodnessly head over heels in like that he doesn\'t know how to handle anything, including himself. i will be very interested to see how you choose to progress the relationship.

aside from the analytical stuff, it got me hot, bothered and gave me that really good squicky abdomen-twisting feeling of good fluff.

great job~_-