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by brandnewdaydawning

person Ibelin Dragon
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

This is more what I invision Malfoy to be like...

I\'m loving this :D
person grace
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fanfic. keep of the gr8 work
person 1red1
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*guh*
Yu\'re right, Possesive Draco is HOT!!!!

Can\'t wait gfor the next chapter!

person xiaojiang
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story! i\'m not a harry potter (did i spell that right) fan but i did saw the first and second movie and i really like your story. great emotion and descriptions. i love it!!! i hope u update soon. u do planned to update right? hope so.
person Anna
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent and i cant wait for the next chapter!
great work
person Bob Saget
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I FUCKING LOVE YOU AND YOUR AMAZING STORY!!! Usually I tell peaople that they fail completely at life, even if i love thier story, but i just had to admit it this time. Your story is amazing, and I want to read more right now! UPDATE DAMNIT!!!
person jose
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please go on. I like this Draco, he is very believable. Not cruel and stupid but clever and handsome and yummy. Please write some more??
person Annie
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Rain,

*sighs*... Oh how I love this story! I love that Draco is a secret protector... it\'s just so dreamy! I\'m sure every girl dreams about having some gorgeous guy who watches over them and Hermione has Draco... the lucky girl! *is jealous*

I\'m loving the originality of this plot and the style of your writing. I\'m getting ever so involved with everything you write that I find I\'m reading into the early hours of the morning! I know that you could take us anywhere with this fic and I\'m so excited about it!

Let me just tell you that my heart nearly broke when Draco said this
person Gracie
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course, as per usual, I am left astounded. I actually almost cried in this chapter. The Draco\'s desperation was so heartbreaking. I liked the fight between Harry and Draco, I just wish the Slytherins could be taken down a notch just once. But with the introduction of Pansy\'s drug problem we come to realize they have problems of their own...far greater than losing the house cup. It\'s an interesting insight into their world...we are kept out of it for the most part in the books and your interpretation seems so plausible. I love it

I really enjoy your style of writing. It\'s very organized...as if you have this whole story drawn out on some mind-map somewhere and you write your fic accordingly. I like how everything fits and seems planned. I love it.

Beautiful work. Update soon. Blah blah blah
person bubbles
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great - as per usual. ;) I love how you depict Draco. Btw, if anyone ever tells you that this story sucks, ignore them. Just ignore them.

I\'m really disliking the waiting period between chapters though. :P

Hurry up and update mate. :)

(oh, the \'mate\' part was because I\'m aussie)