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by brandnewdaydawning

person FIONA
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY AND THANK YOU BETAS! LOL UPDATE SOON!
person Sommer
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really, Really good chapter
update soon please
person geo
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you rain I really really do! thanks soooooo much! It was as awesome as the last chapter!!!!

geo
person Ivy
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story please keep writing!
person Yoshima
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gawd you make me cry, i want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Cecille
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love how human you\'ve made draco and hermione. not that either have become nicer and/or less complicated, but they just seem so three-dimensional now. i think it\'s because of how you situate their relationship as parts of their daily lives yet in terms of private moments, instead of central to it and filled with showy displays and dramatic conflicts. i just really, really, really love the way you\'ve written this story :)
person greer
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! I like that Draco and Hermione have a few little spats, thats normal. This is developing nicely.
person grace
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, if you send out emails to your reviewers next time u update, can u please send it to my new one XTheHiddenOneX@yahoo.com ? thank u so much!
person cruttan
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapter is wonderful! I really enjoyed the teaser with Ron and Pansy- I have enjoyed the complexity of the Ron factor throughout the story. It\'s cool that your Ron is not a typical extreme- a total ass or a suddenly platonic friend- and I think what you have done with that whole part of the story really strengthens it. And I loved the last scene between Draco and Hermione- sigh...

It made my day to read the update- thanks!
person grace
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigosh! i love this story! thank you SO MUCH for updating. once again, you impress me. this chapter is just, FANATASTIC. i\'m on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter!!!! and thanks SO much for emailng me with the update. u simply ROCK!