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by brandnewdaydawning

schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like your story. You write Hermione/Draco very well. Update soon.
person 1red1
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yaaaaay! you updated!!!
I loved the bit where you describe hermione laying on the piano. I can imagine just how she felt... and now I want to try it! :D
The last scene was so sweet - draco was so sweet, and I\'m glad that hermione finally gave him the go ahead. hehehe... i\'m anticipating some lovely lovely chapters ahead! :)
And I wonder what\'s going to happen with the Pansy situation???

I\'m thrilled to hear that you\'ve got another chapter on the way for jealousy... I\'ve checked that story so many times it isn\'t funny!
keep up the great work!

1red1
person Siobahn
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, aww, aww and once again aww... Great chapter! I think I turned to a puddle of goo while reading it it was just so fricking cute!
person lorett
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RAIN -

Running in and kissing you on both cheeks. How continental of me.

You\'re MOST WELCOME for the beat-love. ANYTIME, seriously. And BRAVO for the additional, smooching scene.

LOVED IT. The perfect little addition to end the chapter nicely.

Your Draco...WOW. I just adore him. And a flustered Hermione is always sweet when Draco turns on the romance. That charmer! LOL.

Oh and can\'t forget to mention, you guys with your acronyms. You, SJ, Neffy, Ronnie...You guys kill me. WHY can\'t I be clever like that too?

Disgruntled sigh.

Ah well.

Loved the chapter.

Love the story.

Love you too.

Can\'t - CAN NOT WAIT for JEALOUSY! WHEE!

Anyway, if you\'d like me to take a beta read through as well, or anytime, I\'m here for you love.

SMOOCHES AND HUGS

L
person curlyq2713
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! aww...he called her baby. good chapter. keep up the good work. update soon! :-)
person yaness
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story
you should update more often
person blumvale
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! I\'m so glad you updated!!!! This is a good chapter. With all the plot advancments it\'s nice to see how sweet Malfoy can be to Hermione. Even when they fight it shows how much he cares for her! I love it!
person Liz
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still LOVE...love, love love! Your Hermione and Draco are some of my favorites. And, I can wait patiently for updates, as long as they KEEP COMING :). Don\'t stop!
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read all of this today. HOT DAMN. Very good fic. Suspenseful, romantic, hot! :) go you!
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* lovely update!