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by brandnewdaydawning

person Kez
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved the latest chapter. Thankyou so much for providing us with this masterpiece, it makes the perfect christmas. The atmosphere you created was perfect. So sensual it fit Draco and Hermione perfectly . A*** all round. Merry Xmas!
person myself
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh that was FANTASTIC. although the WAITING *cough cough cough* killed me, the story made up for it believe me. Oh i loved the whole exchanged between Draco & Hermione about the possibility of a baby and all. Oh it was great. great great great. man i cant say it enough

GREAT job

schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you finally updated. I loved this chapter. It was very...nice...lol. In other words, hot. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Witchiepooh
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Was so happy to see that you've updated! Hope you get a chance to work on Jealousy soon as well, I love both stories. This chapter was great. Poor Hermione needs to give herself a break, glad she could relax *ahem* with Draco. :)
person tashi
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...this is brilliant...i dont even know what to say, i am on chapter 7 and i am soooo thankful i still have 3 chapters to read...it's 4 in the morning but i'm going to finish what you've got here...thanks
person KELLI
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohmygod! Absolutley loooove the way you write Hermione and Draco in this! If I had half a chance I would lock Draco up in my bedroom for a year (along with Lucius:-D) I love how mature and mysterious he is while still accepting Hermione just as she is! Please update soon!
person Vicky
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg thankyou!!!! I must say it was a treat to read!!! I hope you update Jealousy soon as well!!
person oracle
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let you know if it sucks...geez woman! You've got to be kidding! That was the single most heart-stopping, erotic as hell, long awaited piece of smut I have read in ages! You totally made my christmas. And his...um...penis? That was the very best part. Can't wait to read your fic for the exchange, I'm sure it will be amazing...as everything you write seems to be:) Happy Christmas!
person Maya
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, Girl I haven't seen such good writing in a long time. I simply adore U. Please write more...
person Vicky
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i. love. you.


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