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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wait. this is it? thats the end? hell no. at least make a sequel. with a close to death encounter with death eaters. then draco gets caught by the dark lord....something like that. am i mistaken? this isnt the end is it. of course not. please reasure me.
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it. That was a great chapter. I hope that ther are going to have a real relationship. Are Harry and Ron going to find out though. Can't wait until the next chapter.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Incredible length...::giggle:: Ah, brilliant chapter. Goodness I love your writing style not to mention how much I adore how you depict the characters. SQUEEE!!! This chappie was a wonderful Christmas present. Lol. All I have to say is WOW...I want a Draco for Christmas.
-Dantesguide
-Dantesguide
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Absolutely lovely. Very romantic. I couldn't have pictured Hermione giving in to him any other way. And isn't Draco sweet? "What? Don't you want to have my baby?.... How about a year from now?..."
Two thumbs up as usual. Please update soon!!!
LaLa Out...
Two thumbs up as usual. Please update soon!!!
LaLa Out...
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Rain! Lovely! What do you mean "go back to the drawing board?" Not a chance! It was a delightful surprise. :D
I love the way that you write Draco. I just absolutely love him. This chapter had a number of moments that I beamed/swooned/became irrationally jealous of Hermione.
His approach in the hallway for instance. When he snuck up on her and pulled his big bad Slytherin routing I was squeeing with delight. Then when he said his bit about her being "at his mercy"... *gasps for breath* Well done... I love all of their meetings. When it comes right down to it, they don't get very many chances to rendezvous, and I love the way that you make each meeting so very charged. Lots and lots of UST which led to one beautiful love scene.
:P Speaking of which, GAH! Words fail me in my efforts to describe just how beautifully done that was. You captured the first-time element so perfectly. It was very hot, but also within the realm of reason. No French ticklers... yet ;)
And their little conversation afterwards was so adorable. I couldn't stop giggling. Draco's personality is just SO Draco here, but so unbelievably funny too. I loved his deadpan delivery- "You don't want to have my babies?" I'm ashamed to admit that his joke made me thirst for some good Draco/Hermione baby fluff. I'd carry his children! Erm... maybe not, but I do a love a GOOD baby fic involving those two. Emphasis on the good. Anyhow, that's totally off the topic, but his little comment set off the inner fangirl in me.
It was just lovely. A balanced blend of romance, drama, and humor. You are such a wonderful writer and I'm so impressed that you can do this along with everything else you have going on! Thanks for the lovely update!
MWAP!
I love the way that you write Draco. I just absolutely love him. This chapter had a number of moments that I beamed/swooned/became irrationally jealous of Hermione.
His approach in the hallway for instance. When he snuck up on her and pulled his big bad Slytherin routing I was squeeing with delight. Then when he said his bit about her being "at his mercy"... *gasps for breath* Well done... I love all of their meetings. When it comes right down to it, they don't get very many chances to rendezvous, and I love the way that you make each meeting so very charged. Lots and lots of UST which led to one beautiful love scene.
:P Speaking of which, GAH! Words fail me in my efforts to describe just how beautifully done that was. You captured the first-time element so perfectly. It was very hot, but also within the realm of reason. No French ticklers... yet ;)
And their little conversation afterwards was so adorable. I couldn't stop giggling. Draco's personality is just SO Draco here, but so unbelievably funny too. I loved his deadpan delivery- "You don't want to have my babies?" I'm ashamed to admit that his joke made me thirst for some good Draco/Hermione baby fluff. I'd carry his children! Erm... maybe not, but I do a love a GOOD baby fic involving those two. Emphasis on the good. Anyhow, that's totally off the topic, but his little comment set off the inner fangirl in me.
It was just lovely. A balanced blend of romance, drama, and humor. You are such a wonderful writer and I'm so impressed that you can do this along with everything else you have going on! Thanks for the lovely update!
MWAP!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Extremely well...I can't even believe it was not beta'd. You did a great job, even greater. Thank you so much for updating before Christmas. It was the perfect gift for your readers/followers of this story, I assure you. And even more that ending that assured us more that Malfoy does want a long-term relationship with Hermione. Great Chapter! Congrats and Thanks once again...!!!! Happy Christmas to you too!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I read it on the other site and forgot that it was more detailed here, so I rushed to read this version... Brilliant!! Just brilliant! I loved this chapter more than the others just cause they finally came together but don' tget me wrong, all the others are totally great too. keep it up! Have an awesome happy holiday! Really looking forward to what you got coming up next because I just love everything you write. I think your stuff is just genious.
PEACE
PEACE
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH!! Amazing. They finally did it! YAYE! *giggles* Wonderful job, hon!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank You Thank You Thank you.I have been waiting so long for you to update and you finally did yeah!! You have made the next 5 days of my life until christmas absolutly wonderful. I love your writing so keep up :)
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a truly entertaining fic!! I just sat and read it all in one sitting. Boy am I gonna be tired for work tomorrow. It was well worth it though. Please keep up the great work and update as often as you can.
Thanks for sharing with us,
Thanks for sharing with us,