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for Obscurity

by brandnewdaydawning

person Debi
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rain!!!! That was fantastic!!! I love it so freaking much you dont even know!! I have to say this is one of my favortie's after one of Lilycats!! Draco is sooo freacking perfect there is now way you couldn't love this fic!! I'm a total Draco and Hermione shipper! You put their relastion ship together soo perfect I can't wait to read the next chapter! So post it soon!!


Love
Debi
person Aurora
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oddly enough I can totally see Hermione thinking about home work in that situation it's definitely an in character moment. However, were I in the same position I can tell you that school and anything else in gneral would be the farthest things from my mind.

Just one note: Strait refers to a body of water between two peices of land. Straight refers to an even line, not to be a nit picker or anything.
person Edel
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd forgotten how much I LOVE this fic! lol. Please please please email me when you update! Great chapter.
person Sarah
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!! I love this story and miss it! :)
person Sarah
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention how much I love the way you've explained some of Draco's actions towards Hermione in the past books. Keep up the good work!
person Mandy Reader
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Great++++
I'll watch up 4 your next fiction!!!!




CAN'T WAIT!!!!!
person Caitlin aka DracosDuchess
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a WONDERFUL story! I absolutely adore it! Your attention to detail, and your ability to describe every intimate scene between Draco and Hermione is unbelieveable! I can't WAIT for you to update! Please do it soon! And throw in some more "smut" (as you call it!). It's great!
person carabella
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a fantastic read and im hoping 4 an update :)
person C_Dog
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha I loved the last sentence of that chapter! Perfect time to think of that, huh? Lol keep up the good work!
C_Dog ~_^
person Olivia
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very amusing... cant wait to read the next chapter