rate_review Reviews

Well, that was a dumb move. Why not go inside the loo and call you parents or better yet...TEXT them instead of going out alone. For someone who supposedly intelligent, you wrote the most stupid Hermione.

I think that Hermione's mom was just within her right to stop her from going out alone. And Hermione's a bitch. What's up with arguing with her savior.

I REALLY like the way you write. is both funny and clever. and i like this story very much, also.
i really hope you update soon, along with jealousy, that i read in ff.net (:
Cheers and congrats!

This is the best fan fiction I've ever read! And I've pretty much read all of them so that's saying a lot. So disappointed that you have apparently abandoned this story :( is there anything we can do to get another chapter??? Please????

I absolutely fucking love this story and can't wait for you to post another chapter! I've now also read all your one shots and everything you have so far on your longer stories.

Please keep going. This is good.

I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

Is there anymore to this story? I'd love to read the rest. Please update, if not!

I'm liking the story so far, but there are things that stand out and most of it is your spelling errors, even in the chapters that you have had run through your beta testers.

On the up side, at least you don't spell "Neville" "Navel" as I've seen in some other fanfictions around here.

Please keep up the good work, but have your beta testers pay closer attention. Words like 'vial' are spelled wrong (spelled 'vile') and the meaning gets skewed if you don't read carefully enough. Also, Pansy Parkinson's last name is misspelled several times as are a few of the spells in the story.

The errors detract from the overall flow of the story, but the plot is still solid enough to keep readers interested.

hi i really really like this story is there gonna be an update soon or is this going to be an abandoned story because i really really like this story.