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by cravache

schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh God. That was so so so wrong, and I really really really shouldn't have liked it. And aside from the obvious fascination for completely gross things, I liked the dynamic you built between Malfoy and Crabbe/Goyle. I never really think about it, but I liked the bully relationship. And the whole things was so gross and I couldn't stop reading it.
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha once again, the first chapter was sickening yet isgustingly funny, ugh, you are one sick person! The second chp. was sick too, but funny in a twisted way.

cheers
person GruenerWackelpudding
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!!!
I couldn\'t stop reading and I don\'t wanted to read after I got what draco wanted to do with that...thing and oh dear and then hagrid where did you get that idea? it\'s so disgusting it\'s cool...and oh my god!!!! I\'m going to be sick and it was...was....I shivered and...I really don\'t know what to say....like I said it\'s so disgusting it\'s cool....
GW
person nothing
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i normally dont review, but i had to on this one....
it was so discusting but at the same time, so awesome. and humilating... a slug up the ass whould be very hard to explain without feeling shamefull. i feel more sorry for the slug then goyle and crabbe...and i love that draco ahs the power to do that to them.
and as for the hagrid part, yea, i whouldnt be surprized. he kinda likes animal too much in my option. but yeah that was awesome.
you are a great writer. being able to write somthing so naughty but writing it so well that even the discusted have to finish it!
person Bre
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was SO wrong about what you did to Goyle!!!!!ugh!
person Peigi
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...wow
person Jinx II
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Both chapters were very well written, I loved them both dispite the disgusting
feeling I got while reading them. But even though I was cringing, I couldn\'t
help laughing at how easily Goyle had fallen into the whole thing and how
Draco was so amused by it all. I really liked this, it had to be the funniest
story I\'ve read here. Good Work!
person kit
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!
never read anything like it
i was shocked that you thought such a thing up
but wow it was like, duno now but write another
just couldnt keep my eyes off it
person Prongs
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant read,loved when Draco got curious and prodded the slug in further..-grins- I\'d have done the same thing.-bows- I\'m in awe as always,and rather enjoyed Draco ordering around Crabbe and Goyle.
person Angelic Rosethorn
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to fight to keep from being sick, but this story was absolutely brilliant. You have such a wonderful way with the detail. I made 2 of my friends read this, and they agree that it\'s sick but awesome. Kudos to you!