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for Temerity

by MajaLi

person armitage43
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Surprise LOL! I got off my ass made some time and finally got to read one of your fics. Temerity was an excellent fic. I loved the Draco POV at the beginning and end they were fun!!

*hugs and smooches*

Ryouga (author of Dangerous Affairs)
person armitage43
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sweatdrops* goodf grief LOL I already read and reviewed this once LOL!! Good job I have a good memory... NOT LOL ^_~ t was much love all the same ^_~

*more hugs n stuff*

Ryouga, the... needs to sleep braindead personage!
person gab
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok. now we all know that it\'s good. so stop with the reposting of the same thing and update already!!!
person crystal
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wah, you should at least continue to the H/D parts~! >.< It was really interesting so please keep going!
person Squall-sama
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was slightly confusing here and there--as if you jumped from one thing to the next a little too quickly... but it\'s rather well written anyhow. There aren\'t huge spelling mistakes--thank Hyne. >.< It sound very interesting so far though--is going to be DracoxHarry? instead of HarryxDraco.... please, please, PLEASE let it be DracoxHarry!!!!!! *begs on my hands and knees*
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OIY, LOL. Fairs fair! I just updated Dangerous Affairs so how about updating this LOL. No leaving it here nuh uh no way ^_~

*hugs* Ryouga chan (author Dangerous Affairs) ^_~
person EBrahmsJ
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I finally got to read the whole thing! Keep going, please. And keep up w/the Cabin 12 story (can\'t wait for the next installment! heehee...) And come back online sometime, will ya? Pleeeeeeease? We all miss you!!! Oh, and there was a slight error somewhere where you meant to make a word plural but accidentally put \" \'s \" instead. I\'ll look back for it...but it\'s just a nit-picky thing, really. Still a lil confused as to what\'s going on with the lil girl...but I guess that\'ll be cleared up a bit in the next chapters^_^ ~EBJ, aka Kit, more or less...

BTW...I\'m thinking of doing a group piccy of the Cabin 12 charries. Do tell if you have any specific descriptions; I can\'t quite remember what Saeros looks like, or how Mahaliel\'s ears are shaped. Or the exact appearance of Cris/Michael (shall I assume that he/they look like that manga charry Me-chan based them on? hmmness...) Kit, Mathias, and Happy-Elf I\'m good on (unless you\'ve recently changed Mathias somehow...)
More later! Luv ya!
person EBrahmsJ
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~smacks head on desk~ Well no WONDER I haven\'t seen you online lately (even if you haven\'t been)! I was missing a part of your screen name!
person gabby
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you\'re an awesome writer... but this whole one new paragraph at a time, driving me crazy! make with the new chapters already, your story looks so interesting.
person gabby
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your an awesome writer. you\'re very visual. I love what your doing. one of the best harry potter fanfiction I\'ve read yet.