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awesome!!!!!! thanx for the email by the way! I cant wiat for the next chapter where they \'discuss\' what happened. i reckon that hermione should seek him out and apologise and tell him the thoughts she had, that ought to give her a few brownie points

Oh, you truly are at the crossroads. Form one college student to another (im also taking 16 credit honrs-how weird-), I understand how hard finding time is, but if it makes you feel any better, this is one of my favorite H/S fanfics. It really is quite good. I\'d like to see a softer side of Snape...like say he slowly opnes up to Hermione, and she in turn....well, helps him cope. *hint hint* If you could have some Draco confrontation...perhaps when she joins V. Draco would know and he could have some... rather evil intent/issues....that he\'d like to....resolve....*hint hint*...but can\'t do because of a protective someone...*hint Hint*. Whatever you write will be a delight, never fear! The nine have graced your keyboard you lucky little minx. Kudos for me for making ya blush...tee hee...you\'re a keeper! Kisses and much love from Eddie The Black Maru

Chapter three. I thought Snape and Hermione were really in character in this chapter. The only thing I thought was off was Hermione getting hysterical over the thought of Voldemort wanting her alive and on his side. She would have presented many scenarios, but in a much calmer matter. Overall, very enjoyable and I look forward to more. Good going!

I just read the first 3 chapters, and wow, they are excellent! This story is interesting, and I cannot wait to read more :)

Very interesting first chapter. I like that one of Harry\'s companions (in this case Hermione) has gotten a glimpse of what he has been going through, having disturbing dreams. I think it\'s logical that as Voldemort gains power his presence should leak out to those around Harry. I do find it a bit odd that Harry would be so keen on having Hermione go to Dumbledore to report her dreams, since in the past he\'s ignored the same advice from her. But overall I really liked this chapter and look forward to reading more.

Well done. The nightmare sequence was gripping and the reaction of Hermione and her roommates after the nightmare was perfect. I giggled at the thought of \"Neville in a Speedo\" as a nightmare. The Death Eater meeting was also well written, although I think Voldemort would rather blame people for their incompetence or stupidity rather than his \"brittle patience\". I guess it doesn\'t pay for Hermione to be the smartest witch of her age, does it? Looking forward to the next chapter.

oooohhhh, cant wait for update, plz email me when u post the next chappy!

This is very good. I\'m eagerly anticipating the next chapter.

Oh that was really good! seriously! please update soon! make it a long long long chapie for me, yes? can\'t wait to read the next installment, much love, Eddie the Black Maru