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for Harry\'s first time

by Evahpfan05

person Dorian
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unrealistic and with some spelling errors, but otherwise fine.
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're a moron, stop writing
person Baz
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it even more
person Spike of Doom
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was good!.. i suggest adding a plot, multiple sex scenes and youll have a hit story on AFF :)