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for Black Eden

by sabbitha

person yana
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please
person Storm
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! How did Snape not notice Harry falling when he was right on top of Draco??? Gods, men are soooooo.... Ok now that I got that whole oh-my-god-someone-has-to-do-something schpeel, That was great. I love this story and I hope you keep updating.
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 7. How could no one notice? Why did the bludger keep after him? What happens next?
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that they\'ve realized that they are mates how are they going to make this work? Will they come out to the school? Sneak around? Can\'t wait for more!
person Alexa
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great!
Write more, right this second! :)

I do hope that Draco will get to be submissive at some point - we don\'t wan\'t to rob him of the experience, do we? :)

The middle chapters were great, it was so interesting to see the begining of the emotional twists... and the lack of sex - not worth apologising, you do good sex and good non-sex. :)

Do have a question: what was the reason Draco was so upset in the begining of the last chapter? I really didn\'t get it.
person Alexa
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot - could you *please* expand on Harry\'s new and rougher (vampirish) character? I really liked the idea!

And I love it when they get jealous! :)

Thanks again, *keep writing!*.
person storm
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! I like this story. Please update soon
person thrnbrooke
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dangerous snakes? Oh i can\'t wait for the next chapter!!! More!!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco knew? He was there? Oh holy moly! And now he might be Harry\'s mate? When will they know? What happens next? I need chapter 4!
person Melagic
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is shaping up to be VERY interesting, just please keep updating more, so I don\'t have such suspensful waits between updates. For a first timer, other than the lack of paragraphs, it\'s very good.