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for Black Eden

by sabbitha

person thrnbrooke
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for chapter 9! Please hurry! How will they explain Harry\'s absence to Draco?
person Lady X
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a good story. I really like it alot.I can\'t wait for the next update! If it wouldn\'t be to much of a problem could you please e-mail me when you update?? it would muchly appreciate it and will review faster if you did.
person Alexa
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice how you got out of that Light/Dark problem. Makes sence.
About the bloody animal - I\'m puzzled. And a bit worried. What does it mean?
Keep writing and posting - please! :-)
person Alexa
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. So captivating!

But, I do have a complaint. When Sirius says: \"You will question where your loyalties lie and decide whether there is really a Light and Dark side, or if there are only shades of gray. The people who you\'ve trusted, without question, will now be questioned for ulterior motives. It will be up to you, to decide. It will be up to you whether the Dark is subsided and conquered by the Light, or if the Light will be overshadowed by the Dark. Only you, Harry.\"
You begin to breack that childish binary of \"Dark\" and \"Light\" but then you swiftly return to in, by saying \"It will be up to you whether the Dark is subsided and conquered by the Light, or if the Light will be overshadowed by the Dark\". Then why even tease us with the possibility of gray? And if after seeing all the memories, Harry will eventually still use that binary, what is the point in the memories? Aren\'t they supposed to make it possible to see gray and live in a gray world? Or will he just admit that there are gray shades, but end up acting as if there is only \"Dark\" and \"Light\"?

Regardless, I do love the story, and very much enjoy reading it! Thank you! KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!! :-)
person yana
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so I hope you update soon.
It was a very nice chappie. I\'d like to read more.
person ooo
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol this is great plz update!
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome
please please please
update soon
person Storm
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how you made Lucius so human. I also like how you made Snape seem somewhat more compassionate. Good job. I like it and can\'t wait to read what everyone is doing with Harry out for the count.
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy moly! Harry almost had it all! A caring family.... the works! I\'m soo sad for him!
person dark_princess
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE! PLEASE! you can\'t leave it hanging like this! it\'s evil! -sobs-