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for Black Eden

by sabbitha

schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter 9, can't wait to see when/what you update with. :D Keep it up, you're a wonderful writer! XD

Love,
Nymphy Fate.
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, interesting. This is pretty good! Do tell me when you write more, won't you? Thanks.
person Cammi
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey could we get more of this stroy cues I liek it thus far, well thought out and typed, I would not have carred about eth grammer if I had typed it, so could we like get oh ten more chapters hu?
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for chapter 10! Siri was rather cold. And yet later he seems to care so deeply for his godson. Hmm. Wonder if its because he looks so much like James.
person chi no hana
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wooooooooooooow! first chapter is coooool! but you reall yneed to either work on your french or get a new translator... not many spelling mistakes, but the syntaxe isn\'t exactly peachy... ( that was just some advice! )
person YamiNoWedge
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You suck. Okay, no you don\'t, but you seemed to want to be told that. *sighs modestly* it\'s my way of giving, really... Anywho, I like your story! And I\'m sorry about the whole moving-and-not-having-internet thing. Please update more quickly next time (you have no excuse not to) and good luck! ^_^

Mechante
person Els
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am hooked. HOOKED! And I\'m bloody leaving for two weeks of sans-internet holidaying tomorrow... *grumbles*

I love this story. I adore vampire anything (though het-vampires are a bit squicky... I mean, come on! Does that not simply *scream* crime-against-nature? Vampires are gay, you hear? GAY. (I think I\'m speaking to a convert... xD)), and Draco/Harry with either one (or better yet, both) as a vampire is a dream come true. Unless the writing is horrible, which is most certainly not the case with Black Eden.

I love your Lucius in the memory. For once, he has feelings! Very nice, for once. And Narcissa was sufficiently nasty. (I\'ve never been a huge fan of hers.) And was that Severus/Lily -hintage I saw there? Oooooooh, that would be rather nice...

(Yes, I am aware of the fact that I am making no sense... But it *is* past midnight, so it\'s the night-time crazy-energy kicking in, not my innate weirdness slipping out of control... *tries to be convincing*)

The walk down memory lane thingy is intriguing. And fics with someone in a coma always have a tendency to be delicious!

I demand more fic. You\'ll post the next chapter today, right? *tries bambieyes, but moves on to bribery by means of chocolate and naked men when simpler methods do not work*
person Cleresta
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please!
person MadEyeMax
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished the first chapter. That was nice. I always love to read about Harry and Draco discovering and exploring their *eh-hem* need for one another. Very hot. I think I need a cigarette.
person yana
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a short chappie, but nice.
update soon.