rate_review Reviews

Wow, this is a great story! And you are right - Hermione is WAY to smart to be distroyed after the Final Battle! I really like the whole plot and how she is stealing stuff. Can\'t wait to read more! :)

Ohh....what a great chapter, now I\'m going to be pondering... what vengence, who\'s vengence, vengence, vengence, vengence! lol. I love the way you portray Malfoy, he doesn\'t loose any of his aragant, aristacrat attitude. Some writers seem to leave out that small but HUGE Detail. But anyways, what a wonderful story, I am going to be returning many more times to this story, that\'s for sure. Keep up the great work!
~Bree~

You updated, yes! I\'ve been checking almost daily to see a new chapter since the beginning of March... I just love this fic. Thank you!

One of the best fics I have EVER read! Intriguing, well written and original to boot. I can\'t wait to see where this goes. I do hope you will update soon. I will be checking in daily :D

Great chapter. I\'m so glad you continued posting to this story. Hermione is too smart for him, he\'s just going to have to wait her out. I\'m looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully Draco will get to hold onto his cute little hiney for a little while longer. Damn Pettigrew, can keep his mousy little nose out of anything!

wOw....this.is.a.FANTASMIC.story!!!!
I really like the way you have portrayed Hermione and Draco...even if it\'s been mostly Draco\'s POV.
OO you know, I understood all of the stuff you were saying about the genetics....for some reason I feel really special about that :D
yeah....I was totally reminded about \'The Pink Panther\' opening when the theif was stealing the book...and cat woman....hehe it looked really cool in my mind, I can only wonder what it looked like to you.
I hope you finish this story....I can\'t stand it when you really get into a story and then the author decides not to finish. I can understand that on occation an author gets a lot of blank shots when thinking about the next chapter to write, but if the author is just being lazy and is forgetting about the loyal fans and the story, they should be shot.
I\'m sorry, I kinda got into a little rant there ^__^;.......so yeah...I think your story is awesome on twenty BILLION different levels and I really think you should update soon.....come on.....I\'ll give you a cookie!
-bob

Well done... the genetics were done lay terms -- it might have been fun to see her get technical and then \'dumb it down\' for him -- but you handled it nicely nonetheless. I particularly like Draco\'s interest in spite of himself and the fact that it bothers him. It\'s very in character. Hermione as the dancer extraordinaire seems to go hand-in-hand with her espionage and acrobatic training, and it will be nice to see the reveal of her training. Your Tanya reminds me of Tonks, and the changing from effervescence to older-than-their years looks was quite effective. People who are hunted and enslaved and working in an underground fashion would definitely have this quality.

All in all, I look forward to your posts and read them as quickly as you post.

Great job keeping the plot rolling. You have a real knack for descriptions as well, great work!

The mystery of love is greater than the mystery of life. - Oscar Wilde


Very neat idea... I\'m looking forward to the culmination... Why do I have the feeling that Hermione and Draco will be using the staff and the orb? Because I can sense the shadowing... and the theme of Persephone and Hades... quite lovely... Pray, continue on, oh fair author!!!

thanks so much for the update! i was worried that you had abandoned this story. i\'m in the midst of studying for exams,
and boy did i need this nice break. i love your writing style, and i love the fic. i can\'t wait for something else to happen,
an escalation of sexual tension perhaps? maybe a angry confrontation? i can\'t believe how good hermione is being at
keeping her cool. i think you have done a great job with the characters. please keep writing! i\'m looking forward to the
next chapter.

nnt