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for Vengeance

by Vashka

person JUJI
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
U really need to update more often. I completely forget about this story with no regular updates. It\'s really good writing and I enjoy the plot. Update sooner then a few weeks.
person Kewlpoohgirl
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow I really love your story. The plot is just great and has got me hooked. Can\'t wait for you to update. I feel sorry for Draco and hopefully he and Hermione will work together so the good side wins at the end. I really liked how Hermione and Draco still remenisced and remembered little things about their past. It makes the story much more sentimental rather than simply being written on a tangent from JKRowling\'s work. Keep up the good work and I\'ll be checking everyday for an update =D
person glenn
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, thanks for not making us wait unitl you end HBP, please keep going, i am waiting for the next chapter, you story is too good
person ---
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this is an amazing story. You put so much detail in it, I\'m having trouble breaking away! And your looong chapters don\'t help...
But I definitely enjoy reading this story a lot, so please update veeery quickly. I am eager to read the rest of this story! ::sigh:: I love draco/hermione fics. and I can tell that this is going to be a GREAT one!
person Joi
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the best stories I have ever read on fanfiction. I must say i usually go for one shots simply because i get bored with the plots of novel length stories. Yours however has captured my interest and I can\'t wait for an update. So please make it soon! As for the scene in chapter three, I hardly think it matters much, the is fanfiction after all; making the impossible a reality... sort of. Update soon! cheers! Joi
person jeslyn_nighthawk
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I\'d rather see more chapters sooner, than see you try and make this one canon... A short, but sweet chapter; I can\'t wait to see where this is going.
person Jenn
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to ask - David Eddings fan? :)
person bob
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya\' know, I really like how inventive you are....and I totally think that Hermione would have a plan B for if Harry died.....I really like how bubbly you made the orb, I\'d name the orb Bertha....\'cause it\'s a funny name to say :D
I\'m really baffled as to how you\'re gonna work in the whole issue of Hermione telling Draco about how Wormtail killed his dear daddy....or if you\'ll get her to tell him at all.
I really liked the interactions with Blaise.....he seems to just know everything about Draco doesn\'t he?
And I really liked that in the 6th book....I\'m totally off topic here but I\'m gonna say it anyway.....that Blaise is black!!! I still havn\'t finished the book...seeing as I only got it two weeks after it came out.....but seriously...have you ever read a HP fan fic that had Blaise as a black man? He\'s always white and italian......which is hot, dont get me wrong, but I like JK\'s look better :P
WOOOW!!! I never noticed how long it took for you to update....but it was worth it.....this chapter was pretty informative....and I laughed when Laveinder (sp \'cause I suck :9) turned out to look just like Trewlawny!!! It, indeed, rocked my socks off!!
Anywho....you should update as soon as freaking possible.....\'cause I totally love this story....it deserves a cookie! *throws cookie at you*
_bob
person biz
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I was so excited to see that you updated, please continue your wonderful story!
person mouse
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great, wonderful to have something gutsy to read again. It is pretty well HBP compliant, I wouldn\'t bother rewriting the previous chapters unless it really worried you, personally I\'d much rather read a new chapter.