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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i thought this story was grand well written. and im hoping to see more of it. i\'ve no real suggestions to make just that when you write the next installment let me know :)
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i admit that i felt skeptical when i began your fic but now i am completely hooked! it is fantastically written and i love your descriptions!
please update soon i want to know what happens next lol!
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please update soon i want to know what happens next lol!
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve never reviewed and i\'m not really sure what it entails so I\'ll just wing it. I think you\'re very talented and I like your plot line. You are building on elements of the original but it\'s your own. Not many people have been able to do that. I hope chapter 9 comes up soon! Have a great day, and best wishes,
Emily
Emily
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, i hope hermione helps draco to not die hehe. he knows she\'s the theif!! woaaah, can\'t wait to see what happens next. update soon please :-D
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I loved reading it and I\'m really hoping more is coming soon!
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is SO great! I love this story so much! plz update soon!
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I believe you are very right in Hermione\'s case. I also think she would never, ever, be stupid enough to not consider all the posibilities of the war, as well as the chances and all. I\'m glad you wrote this, I was getting tired of stories where Hermione is caught or murdered in the last battle. Although I must say, if and only if Hermione would somehow be in one of those situations, it would be definetly before the last battle, because there are more chances of killing or capturing her during an ambush or something of the sorts that during something previewed.
Also, the thief thing was amazing. I find myself surprised by the fact that she, indeed, could be the perfect thief. She is clever, so she\'ll use every ook she has in hands. She is a relatively small girl, so she can glitter trough walls and traps with ease. She is also cunning, so she can make last-minute excape plans. There was a small problem in all this and you took care of it as well. Of course, I\'m talking about the fact that she isn\'t very much trained in the prospect; Tonks and Shacklebot came in scene and all went fine. I\'m amazed.
Congratilations for a very fine story! I can\'t wait for the smut^_~
Also, the thief thing was amazing. I find myself surprised by the fact that she, indeed, could be the perfect thief. She is clever, so she\'ll use every ook she has in hands. She is a relatively small girl, so she can glitter trough walls and traps with ease. She is also cunning, so she can make last-minute excape plans. There was a small problem in all this and you took care of it as well. Of course, I\'m talking about the fact that she isn\'t very much trained in the prospect; Tonks and Shacklebot came in scene and all went fine. I\'m amazed.
Congratilations for a very fine story! I can\'t wait for the smut^_~
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!! *heart flutters* I love draco and hermione in your fic. Love the chapter and I can\'t wait for the next update. =D
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay. please update sooner. that\'d be greeaaaat.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m guessing wizards have never seen bellydancing before. I am
really enjoying your story. I hope you can update soon.
really enjoying your story. I hope you can update soon.