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yay, congrats on the engagement. sorry bout the death and spasms :-(

so happy you updated, good chapter! update soon please :-)

i love this story!! great chapter! i hope there will be another chapter up soon! i am sorry to hear about your grandfather and your spasms. i hope you feel better soon.:) On a happier note congrats on the engagement!!!

Draco is still Draco, not even a death scare can change that guy. I like that he was forced to see how out of shape he was, as well as see how many people\'s lives are at stake. The way that he has finally started seeing everyone in a new light (although he still doesn\'t like them) works well. I liked that it was Neville who told him not to hurt Hermione, that she had already been through way too much.

Great chapter! I remember coming to this story awhile back, but I haven\'t had a moment to check in awhile. I\'ll try to check more often now. :)

Hey girl,

I\'m finally getting caught up with your fabulous story! Martial Arts! I practice and yours is the only fic, besides mine, where I\'ve seen them used. I just love it. The tension between Malfoy and Granger is perfectly written. I can\'t wait till you update.

Rain

Awesome story!!! you do a wonderful job of creating a picture in my mind of whats going on in the story...
I have a imagination that likes to create visual stories (one day, i want to produce television/film) and i
don\'t know what it is about your story, but i get a great mental picture of what it would look like on screen.

anyway, keep the updates coming!!! i love your writing style.

Excellent! I cannot wait for the next chapter. Very smart read and original. I love how you made Ms. Granger such a strong character. Keep up the excellent work.

I just got all caught up on this fic, and as always it is wonderful. I am looking forward to the following chapters and further insight into the orb. Poor Draco, seems like his mind is getting a much needed make-over. I hope he ends up teaching. Can\'t wait for the update!

\"I am related to Remus Lupin. Oh God. I think I threw up a little in my mouth.\"

LMAO! This cracked me up. I loved this chapter!

You know, I never thought about the whole Quidditch as exercise thing before, but I suppose you\'re right. Damn! That blows my whole perception of Harry and Draco\'s physique out of the water! They can still have \"lean muscular frames and wiry strength\" right? Anyhow (clears throat)...

I did love the physical training scene, especially the description of his sessions with Tonks. Quite humbling eh? And in front of Hermione no less.

I also really enjoyed all of the interactions between Hermione and Draco. It\'s a precarious time for them it seems, and you\'re really capturing the sort of wary, tense, vibe between them. And Draco and the Orb- I think that the orb is becoming one of my favorite characters (if it can be considered a character). I love that the glow gives off different emotions.

I am loving this, even if your pet peeves are shattering some of my favorite illusions!

Ha! I\'ve only read one other story that didn\'t go with the \"Quidditch Honed Body\" and they commented on just having great thighs too. Good stuff. Update more often, I had actually forgotten about this story.