rate_review Reviews

Mmm. That chapter was tasty!

This story is amazing! I love it and was thrilled to find you had updated. Wonderful job! Congrats on the engagement and I am sorry about your grandfather. Once again, amazing story. I hope you update soon. :D

I can't believe you left us with such a cliffie *whines*. Loved the story and the way everything is set up. Draco and Hermione's development was gradual enough for it to be realistic. Great buildup to this chapter. The orb's really amusing as well, lol! I was wondering if you do email alerts when you update. If you do, can you put me on your list so that I know when you update? Thanks!

Girl, now you have me on the edge of my seat wondering what on earthh you are going to go next. Naughty images of naked skin dancing like surger plums in my head! I adore this story. The orb, a matchmaker, how cute.

Please continue soon, hope RL is looking up.

Rain

Vashka you little tease! I may need to go take a cold shower now. *fans self*

Seriously though, that was intense. You write a mean Draco, lady. In a very good way. I love the relationship between Hermione and Draco. It's so volatile! I love the ups and downs, all the different emotions that pass between them. There are the lust and the attraction, but also all different levels and varieties of affection, including some brilliant humor! I was giggling throughout a lot of the brief scenes of their arguments. It's wonderful how you can insert a bit of "cute" while keeping the more serious tone of the story.

Wow, I'm totally rambling tonight. I haven't slept in about three days, so I must apologize for the totally incoherent nature of my thoughts, but I did enjoy it SO much that I'm going to continue.

The orb! I love the way that orb functions in the story. Every time it plants some sort of vision or emotion into one of their minds I cackle gleefully. It's wonderful! Like little sneak peeks of what could be to come- only the most delightful bits.

The updates are definitely worth waiting for, because your story is amazing!

I may leave another review at a later date when I feel more conscious, but I do want you to know how VERY much I am enjoying your writing. *hugs you*

Great chapter!
I loved it!!!
BTW-Thats so cool, you got engaged!
and sorry about your grandfather.

ooOOooo I wonder what will happen next?? :D

I don\'t think I\'ve read any story with such deep plot in a long time, never mind plot that was so well done. It was very original and highly entertaining. You kept my on the edge of my seat throughout the whole story. You write such beautiful prose-- I\'m envious! That was an evil cliffhanger, and I demand that you update and put me on your update list. Again, excellent, excellent job.

Evil . . . . Evil . . . . But I love it . . . . but you left me and others hanging . . . . Update whenever you are ready too I am sorry for your loss but Happy for your engagement!!!

Oh my God! I can\'t stand the suspence!
Great story so far. I can\'t wait to find out what happens next!