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Oh, Hermione comes across brilliantly. I never really give much thought to what might happen if Harry were to lose (Gods forbid), but I certainly cringe every time I see the set up of Hermione reverting to the world\'s oldest profession to survive. Of course she would have a back up plan, she\'s as gracious as a Hufflepuff, as intelligent as a Ravenclaw, as cunning as a Slytherin, and as brave as a Gryffindor. Our little Hermione would not be sitting on her ass planning Harry\'s victory party. Voldermort our paranoid tyrant, very nice touch, I could definitely see him needing someone to be fighting, he\'s been at the good vs. evil game way to long to just let it go. The little scene with Blaise and Draco as Crabbe and Goyle made me smile, not to mention each duo is the opposite of each other: D/B very asture, aristocratic, collected and C/G are usually portrayed as the dazed idiots; very very nice. There\'s thievery afoot, I can\'t wait to see how that little plot element unfolds and just how my favorite non-couple (at the moment) is involved. Lovely background and a good setup, I expect to see this updated regularily...I\'ll be very disappointed if it\'s not.

Well, I\'m in. :) I love your premise and you know how to establish sexual tension like no one else. Keep me riding.

come on grl! update! i looooove this story! update!!

Awesome! He knows it\'s her--obsessive little ponce isn\'t he! To know it\'s here without evidential proof! He mocks himself! I cannot wait till you post your next offering of \"Vengeance\"!

great story update soon, please

*blinks* hubba hubba, Hermione\'s built! *clears throat.... <_< >_> Anyways. Brilliant bit of a FF, can\'t wait to read more. I always do love a good thief story. And this one is no exception. Oh, and please do add more of that dishy Lord Zabini, after all.. e\' siempre qui calmi!

Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

Trix ^_^

Well its a very original opening chapter. Definitely not the usual situation, I would be interested to see where you take the story from here.

Ch 2 - thanks for updating! I\'m really curious about this Goddess

oooooo that was good! I frikin love the story! keep it coming man! you can\'t just leave us on a cliffy like that!

kudos to you for writing this fic! yay for hermione... she is so much smarter than some of the aff.net authors give her credit for! I often wonder what has happened to canon hermione in some of the stories out there. This was a particularly intense chapter. you described the atmosphere, mood, and costumes quite vividly... i love how draco sensed her presence at the end, though it was a bit predictable. however, the fact that you allude to the notion that he\'s had something for hermione since hogwarts sets up a new challenge for your next chapter. i\'m curious to see what will happen! update soon, i\'ll be waiting to read and review!