rate_review Reviews

really great story. the characters are powerfully portrayed, and the plot\'s amazing. i\'ll be looking for the next chapter...

I truly, truly love this.

You have such an easy, sophisticated style to your prose.
The description of the seductive dance was great, I was completely mesmerized.

Going on the read the other chapters...

Madame

This is such a refreshing tale you\'re telling... a bit mysterious and quite intriguing. I like your characterizations of Draco, and your Hermione is as smart as she should be. I look forward to each of your updates.

Okay, so I read more. This is so sleek...the tone of it is so...consumate, breathless.
I adore it.

I love the character details...Hermione\'s alphabetized beauty products...and Malfoy\'s re-arranging them
just to mess with her, just excellent. I love the subdubed eroticism, it permeates their interactions with each other, and I feel the same banked anticipation.

The pacing is excellent. You have such a great sense of timing...

I was completely absorbed with the theivery scene, it was like a hybrid of XMen, Mission Impossible, and The Avengers.

Great job. Look forward to your writing more.

Much Love,
Madame

hi! wow, i\'m actually very impressed with this story! generally i hate any stories in which harry dies and voldemort takes over the world, as they\'re so OC they gag me. but i like your hermione--so far she\'s just as brave but slytherinny as she\'s actually supposed to be in the books--and i want to read more! also, nice history. i love an author who does their research! anyway, please update soon--this looks very promising!

This is a wonderful story! I\'m really looking forward to the next chapter. I love your Hermione and Draco, great characterization! BTW, do you think you could move this story to the Hermione/Draco category? It might be easier to find there instead of the general HP category which has so many stories.

great story
update soon
it would be fun iff everyone knew that hermione is the thief

Very nice story. I am, however, confused as to why Hermione would bother striking a deal with Draco. She could very easily disappear and create another alias. Are we supposed to infer that she is enamored enough of Draco that she is willing to risk an almost certain death if she is discovered?

This fic is coming along quite nicely! As the reader it does me no good to try and reason with YOUR muse. I\'m just thankful that muse inspired more writing and posting! Who cares if it come in one chapter or two--although, since you asked, two is probably better! Make us beg for it! Being begged is satisfying, isn\'t it? Please, please post your next chapter soon!!!!

another amazing chapter. i love the drama and intrigue that infuses your writing. this is probably my favourite story on AFF.net at the present time, and i was so happy to find this update today! i would love to read any other stories you have, please let me know if you have written any others. i really enjoy your writing style, which i find sophisticated and engaging. as for choosing between shorter chapters and fewer updates, i\'m torn! i guess shorter chapters would be better, because then it wouldn\'t seem so overwhelming to you. I guess just do what you feel is right, and hopefully we won\'t have to wait too long!

nnt