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for In My Mind

by lightgoddess

person antipyro
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\'Only as good as Trelawney at Divination\' - LMAO!!!!!

I hope all the fluff here will clear and Severus will start to realize that he does want to be with Harry - Can there be another choice?????? Really???

Loved the Latin version of flora description, very intelligent and yes, one of my favourites too. Everyone who reads this will flock to the nearest garden centre and buy up the perennial.

O.k., now, Harry\'s plan is to have Severus leave in the early morning.....will it happen??? will Severus stay the night??? It looks dubious at this point, can Harry seduce him to stay.... Please? Hey, Duncan will make him stay - Yeaaaa!

Love this sooooo much and thanks for the email notification of the update, where would I be without you?????......
person Shaddow
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An idea, Sev writes down all the questions he wants to ask himself, gives them to somebody he trusts, takes some VEritaserum and figures out what he wants that way.
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter update soon
person Raija
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you were right, this was sweet but not overly so. Want more...*drool* :)
person Shaddow
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Unbearably cute and sappy- I\'m surprised I didn\'t faint from the over-abundance of cuteness. I commend you on not putting me in a fluff coma- not many can do that. HAve Severus sing some old love song in elvish and have remus hear it. I wanna see Remy\'s reaction to the sight of Sev being sappy and singing. Also, who is gonna be lucky enough to get Remus? I think he deserves someone who will look after the guy. NOT TONKS!!!!!!!!!!!
person Cori Finn!
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great! i just started reading this fic today and i just fell in love. keep on writing, so i can enjoy it!
~Cori Finn (im on ff.net)
person angimagus
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow---liked it. Read it all at once.

Great story idea.

I absolutely LOVE Harry and Snape Slash!! And it is going in the right direction---Snape paced!!! Thanks for a great read!!
person Carmella
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off Awwwwwwww! Ok I liked it, the stroy line is great can we get more now please?
person antipyro
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Bring on the sweet and fluffy - I wanna see Snape be sweet and fluffy - lmao! Can\'t wait for the baby talk when Duncan is born - LMAO louder! Just imagine.........

OH Yes, the Hormones will rage and also after the babe is born too. At least it looks like Harry will have Severus there to lend all the support he\'ll need, never mind all the other people too.

Great work, excellent and thanks ever so much for the wonderful reviews you give to our reviews ---- UGH! Too much mush!!!! Enough of that...let\'s get back to sweet and fluffy, bring on the WAFF!
person Raija
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes the sweet things can be good eveb if they make us puke :)