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for In My Mind

by lightgoddess

person zak & ivan ONE LAST TIME for today!
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LAST review today I promise hehe...

yay it did sorry about that due to our shitty internet I always copy it...

That\'s my smart Ivan...

Now we have like 5 mins Zak

I\'ll tell them I\'m running late

okay, whatever.

zak&ivan
person antipyro
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you surprised me, a bit.....I think......

Is Luna still with her Dad\'s Magazine, the Quibbler or is she now in charge of it and is now writing better articles?

Good trick on Lavendar - she deserved soooo much more.

Love it and want more, soon.
person Jadzia
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned how very much I like this story? It\'s marvelous :)
person Angie/Les`
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh that isn\'t very good. Tehee
person Shaddow
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!! I LOVE THE ENDING!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!
person Killingprophet
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To lazy to log in but wanted to say way to go on this last chapter.
person Zak
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god! I\'m so sorry I haven\'t reviewed lately, let me tell you a story... well my birthday passed and you know I\'m like \"OMG 30\" so Ivan who is away now and was then surprised me with a visit home! It was so romantic and the sex was great.... He had carried me to the bed room I had been crying that morning before going to take my daily jog about the fact that he wasn\'t going to be there. But he was and... his beutiful hair and... I love him. So much.

He left the day after and kissed my forehead. Then my computer crashed that morning and I just figured out it can\'t be fixed so I went out and bought a new one yesterday. I had to work at the coffee shop a bit to get the money, Ivan said that I had to work to get money for the computer. I said \"Okay fine\"

So I\'m working there... yup

Nipple piercings on guys eh? Well... I have a couple lol

I hope you update soon! My heart <3

Goodness... Can you tell I just woke up ? I haven\'t rambled much today... Oh and by the way... the after math of my birthday was a sore ass lol God I love that man.

Ivan if you are reading this get your ass back to our house as sooooon as possible love ^-^

~Zak

I love your story awww fluff lol I\'m okay with some fluff ^-^ I am the girl in this relationship after all >.> (no offense to any girls but I am I\'m the .... I\'m stopping now.... before I talk about sexual positions hehe)

I have to go to work now... *sob*
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person Hambares
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Severus is falling harder for Harry. I\'m so glad. I hope Severus can figure out what he wants soon.