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for In My Mind

by lightgoddess

person lilblueduck
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Starts to whine* Why did it have to stop there? Oh well, this chapter was really cool. I loved the thought of the different types of foods. Loved the Remus/Draco there at the end. I think they make a cute couple. Although, Harry/Snape is still my favoritest Hp pairings. Ok well keep up the good work. The story is turning out to be really good.
person Holly
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another chapter, and a great one! I loved the dinner it was so fun, and I never expected Moony and Draco! That was a suprise^_^ But please write more! PLEASE!!!!!!
person amanda
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i look forward to read more of this story
person lilblueduck
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can you send out a email letting all of your readers know that you have updated? plz and thankyou.
person catnicobuie
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARG! Finish the story already! Please!!!!!! I wanna see little baby Duncan! *pouts*
person Molko
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
F-ing awesome. I love snarry. And the way you do it makes it even the more sweet. And I usually dont like M-Preg, but I find myself excited about it and happy. Great Job and I can't wait for you to update.

M
person Holly
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is a great fic! I can't wait for the next chapter please write soon!
person chinglingdragon
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue with ur story
it is gr8
ur writing in gr8
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\'lo pet, I don\'t think we\'ve been introduced, I\'m coyo. *shakes hands*

just wanted to tell you that *yells* I BLOODY LOVE THIS FIC!!!! There, said. I hope i didn\'t blast your eardrums.

Anyway, I can only find two things to complain about.... Pansy dating one of the twins, cause that\'s just disgusting in my book, and number two the BIG BIG BIG BIG thing that makes me wanna hit something.... YOU ONLY MENTIONED DRACO-CHAN IN PASSING!!!! ONONONONONONONONO you can\'t DO that. Well, unless you have a pharagraf later where you mention that he\'s happily married and doing the horizontal mambo with Percy 24/7, otherwise I\'m going to have to nag you in every review you get from now on from me on this fic.

Consider yourself warned and throughly *she wraps her arms around the author\'s throat and proceeds in engaging in a very entusiastic round of tonsil hockey* snogged!!

kisses,
coyo
person Hambares
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Harry doesn\'t crack under the pressuer of a ritual dinner!