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for In My Mind

by lightgoddess

person Brit
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this story when there were only a few chapters up and just recently came back to it. I loved it then and I love it now. I have to admit how surprised I was at seeing just how updated it was.

Do you by chance have a yahoogroup or something that allows you to let you readers know when you update? If you do could you please let me know so I can hop on the wagon?

Brit
person Sandra Smith
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
such a lovely story, is there more to it?
person Kaelas
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it! i can't wait to see what happens! ^^
person Anony...
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! Your fics is so sweet and amazing.
I really love the mpreg, it is so unusual. That is why I like it, your idea is very original. A story where the preggie character does not become pregnant through a potion or sex. O_o ^_^
But damn it, had to leave the chapter like that and I was waiting for the sex.
Come on write the steamy sex scene quick! I am waiting.
Good job!
Update soon and I hope you write more ss/hp mpreg fics in the future.
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gaah no more beating around the bush!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i want sex !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person curly_dodge
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but one thing confuses me. First, Bill is with Draco and Remus is with the twins. Then, the twins are married and Mooney is shacking up with Bill. This last chapter has Bill married and Draco getting himself some wolfie. Are they all sluts, or is this an oversight?
person Hambares
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That did go well! Although I seem to be reading only fics that include meals tonight and it has left me quite hungry. I loved the fruit on rose petals! So romantic!
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know that you have most likely heard this too many times but

WHY DID YOU STOP THERE??????

Anyway. I've been watchng this story since the 3rd chapter. I love it. Please update soon!

SA
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY you updated
person AzureHart
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you update this. I loved the details of the feast. Thanks for an enjoyable read.