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for In My Mind

by lightgoddess

person wanessa
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very, very, very good story. it\'s very well written and i also didn\'t see any screaming grammar mistakes. i hope you continue to write it. how often do you think you\'ll update it? would it be too much to ask you to e-mail me when you put up a new chapie? and just out of curiosity... where the heck did you get dumblee from?? lol keep up the good work. lot\'s of luv 4 u
person Squall-sama
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow--I really like this! It\'s pretty good so far! And long chapters--I love you already!!!! Little mini Serverus is so adorable! *laughs* I just wanna take him and squeeze him tight and huggles him to death! *grins* More soon?