rate_review Reviews

hi

i absolutely love this story, kinda just stumbled onto this, and omg couldnt stop once i had started. amazing. only query i had really is, isnt bill and remus dating, yet remus left with draco.

other than that brilliant

Aww that stinks but I love your story I hope you can update soon. 

I really hope that you haven't abandoned this story I love it and can't wait for you to update. I love little duncun and severus getting a family and sharing in harry's. Just one question where was dumbledore for the bonding feast isn't he family as well?

What happened to Bill and Remus?? Ohh and i love the way you brought Draco into it all of a sudden!!! You put Sev and Harry together better than some of the others i have read.
kudos

My advice (as a computer geek), is to seek professional help. (If you don't want to pay some stranger money then I suggest seeking out a friend who is a complete computer guru.) Oh, yes; I've one more thing to say:
DON'T EVER USE A FLOPPY AGAIN!!!! Solid state storage (i.e. flash drive) is safer and guaranteed; floppies are volatile and only good for maybe a year (three if you're lucky.) What probably happened was, that you're floppy disk sat next to a magnet for a short period of time.
Just remeber; nothing is every truly gone when concerning a computer.

A wonderful story.

cdk

*huggles* I know the feeling luv, I once lost a 20 page story because the stupid floppy got messed up. I love the story and send you lots of love

Chapter eleven had me go 'eep', naughty author, leaving us hanging with a pre-shag cliffy! Otherwise, a good, wellrounded story. Nice to see some smut where there is actually some introspection of the characters. I mean that the don't just declare their love and be all sap from the beginning.

Now you've done it!!! I read through your A/Ns and saw you sai=ying about taking so long to update well, now you've gone and gotten me hooked on the story, so damn it!!!! Update!!! I simply cannot wait til the next chapter is posted. I'm not typically a SS/HP shipper. My taste typically runs towards HP/DM, in fact that's mostly all I've written when I write slash, but this...this is amazing!! I needed to congradulate you on this because you are the first author to have kept me up 2 hours past when I wanted to go to bed just to find out what happens next in the story!! Keep up the good work and let me know if you ever want someone to Beta for you.

OH MY GODDESS!!!!!! I want to shreik and run around frantically untill I can read more of the wonderful wonderful peice of work!!!!!
*fans self* WOW WOW WOW WOW *shreeeeeeee*
Goddess, please please please please WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

btw....I love it!!!!!
*snicker*