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Very nice. There\'s nothing wrong with lemony goodness...only with sloppily-written childish attempts at lemons. This is NOT: sloppy, childish, or poorly written. Take your time and make sure your ideas are quite firmly followed out to their conclusions. If your fans are truly such, they will appreciate your efforts.

Your story is very cute and I like the way it\'s going. It\'s not too fast and it\'s not too painstakingly slow. I hope that you update often because I can\'t wait to see the outcome of Draco and Hermione\'s relationship!!!!!

Totally loved chapter 2! It\'s nice to see that they can have these great, tempestuous feelings between them, but still have the old biting anger. It would get too predictable without it. I love a good love story and this is shaping up to be one. Kudos! Update soon!

I\'ve got to be honest, is there a Mills and Boon Love story Challenge I don\'t know about?

This was so sweet Hermione\'s parents would have heart attacks.

Oy vey, it certainly didn\'t go as well as it could have. Hopefully Draco only acted like that because he was jealous and angry Hermione gave Ron the password... Jealous is a good thing, very good thing. =)
I\'m quite glad you didn\'t linger on any summer events of Hermione\'s or Draco\'s. While yes, it\'s possible to allow Draco-Hermione interaction in the span of those two months, I often dislike it when they somehow meet in some obscure, unexpected location and make some elusive discovery of one another that allows them to develop their relationship in the following school year. The way you wrote it... Draco can perhaps realize how much Hermione\'s grown over the summer! Or Hermione can realize how much she missed him (like you way you wrote in the story)! And yes well... it can get cliche but I like it like that, baby. =)
Please do update soon and keep up the great work.

awwww adorable story!! i love fluff! lol update asap please! :-) Mo

Yay, please keep going! I really liked the final conversation - how quickly Draco became sensitive and how carefully Hermione had to smooth things over and make him feel secure. Can\'t wait for the next installment. :)

hey there,
this is an amazing story, I love it. You are a great writer, and i love the way you describe things it\'s easy to pictures them. Keep up the great work!!!!

Nadine


p.s. could you send me an email when you post other chapters please !!!!! thanks :)

Well I\'m back to review again as this fabulous fic is more than deserving of my less than fabulous praise. But on a serious note I LOVE IT!!!!!! It just keeps getting better! I love the way you describe the friendship of Harry and Hermione too... Keep it coming!

thank you thank you thank you my god i love this story. it is so good. please update soon