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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:-) I love your story! And I am glad that you enjoy reading mine as well. This chapter was very...eventful! Lol. I liked it! I almost forgot about this fic because, well- you disappeared! Stupid fanfiction. Thank you for the long wait, it was well worth it.
Kristine.
Kristine.
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT! I love this story. I\'m busy bullying people to go read it right now. ^_^ Draco and Hermione is my favorite \'ship of all time... and this is a beautiful story for them. It really does the whole idea justice. Keep up the good work! I LOVE what you\'ve done with this so far!
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woooooot! Awesome! ::coughs:: Well, you know what I mean, lol! I actually had never really thought about HermoinexDraco before you started writing this, but you\'ve converted me! Feel better soon, k? Hugs n kisses!
Luv, Rorikins
Luv, Rorikins
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absoultely fantastic!!!!!! i loved it so freakin much!!!!! *muah*
.tiar.
.tiar.
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...*faints dead away*
THAT was so spine-tingly, tummy-twingily, thigh-clenchingly FANTASTIC! (And very worth the wait, I might add.) Once I picked myself up off the floor and read it again all the way through, TWICE again, I realized that I would never be able to narrow down my favorite parts to a few lines or scenes. The entire chapter ROCKED MY WORLD. Maybe it is because I waited in anticipation of this chappie for so long, or maybe it is because I am, unfortunately, living a rather celibate life right now, but this was just plain HOT!
Primarily because you, Lorett, write sex scenes that are wonderful without being overly graphic. I guess that any sex scene would be considered smut by some, but yours are different from so many others I read that I don\'t think of them as smutty. I\'ll sum it up by saying you write sexy smut, not smutty smut! Does that make any sense whatsoever? I hope so!
I thought the flirting and teasing at the beginning was really fun. The scene with Draco, Hermione and Harry was great! I love it when those two boys start pushing each others buttons. It is SO obvious that something is going on with Draco & Hermione, but I think Harry\'s subconscious refuses to go there yet and that\'s why he is clueless for the moment. The scene with Harry & Hermione was really good, too. It really shows the closeness of their platonic relationship. And egotistical Harry was hilarious! He sounded so much like Draco would! (I have a request: please don\'t make it so Harry is completely gob-smacked when he finds out about Draco & Hermione\'s relationship. Like I said above, he\'s already seen enough to have some suspicions about them and he\'d have to be an idiot not to put 2 & 2 together soon, even if he consciously can\'t admit it. It would make him seem really dumb if he is completely caught off guard when the truth comes out. Not that I don\'t expect him to have a conniption when all is brought to light, mind you...)
The dinner scene with the letter was great, too. I like how you brought in other characters. It makes me wonder how all of them will react once the relationship is out in the open...
Well, you already know how I feel about the scene in the bedroom...(see opening paragraph!) I\'d better not go into it again, or my water bill will skyrocket from all the cold showers...
*claps and rises to her feet* Bravo! Bravo, Lovie! I LOVE this story. It is my little secret vice, right up there with the Thin Mint Girl Scout cookies I keep hidden in the freezer (shhh! don\'t tell!). I am so happy you updated. I wish I could say that it satisfied my craving for \"It Had to Be You\" but, alas, I am afraid that I find myself just as impatient for the next chappie as I was for this one. I know you are writing more than one story, but I hope you can get another chapter up for this one soon (once you feel better!) before the \"sexy smut\" concentration in my blood drops too low. You know that would NOT be good if that happened! Hee hee!
BIG big hugs and smooches to you for the lovely lemony yumminess! I have just spent half my afternoon reading and reviewing Lorett-written fan fics! Oh HAPPY DAY! I have died and gone to heaven, methinks! All because of you... WHEE!
THAT was so spine-tingly, tummy-twingily, thigh-clenchingly FANTASTIC! (And very worth the wait, I might add.) Once I picked myself up off the floor and read it again all the way through, TWICE again, I realized that I would never be able to narrow down my favorite parts to a few lines or scenes. The entire chapter ROCKED MY WORLD. Maybe it is because I waited in anticipation of this chappie for so long, or maybe it is because I am, unfortunately, living a rather celibate life right now, but this was just plain HOT!
Primarily because you, Lorett, write sex scenes that are wonderful without being overly graphic. I guess that any sex scene would be considered smut by some, but yours are different from so many others I read that I don\'t think of them as smutty. I\'ll sum it up by saying you write sexy smut, not smutty smut! Does that make any sense whatsoever? I hope so!
I thought the flirting and teasing at the beginning was really fun. The scene with Draco, Hermione and Harry was great! I love it when those two boys start pushing each others buttons. It is SO obvious that something is going on with Draco & Hermione, but I think Harry\'s subconscious refuses to go there yet and that\'s why he is clueless for the moment. The scene with Harry & Hermione was really good, too. It really shows the closeness of their platonic relationship. And egotistical Harry was hilarious! He sounded so much like Draco would! (I have a request: please don\'t make it so Harry is completely gob-smacked when he finds out about Draco & Hermione\'s relationship. Like I said above, he\'s already seen enough to have some suspicions about them and he\'d have to be an idiot not to put 2 & 2 together soon, even if he consciously can\'t admit it. It would make him seem really dumb if he is completely caught off guard when the truth comes out. Not that I don\'t expect him to have a conniption when all is brought to light, mind you...)
The dinner scene with the letter was great, too. I like how you brought in other characters. It makes me wonder how all of them will react once the relationship is out in the open...
Well, you already know how I feel about the scene in the bedroom...(see opening paragraph!) I\'d better not go into it again, or my water bill will skyrocket from all the cold showers...
*claps and rises to her feet* Bravo! Bravo, Lovie! I LOVE this story. It is my little secret vice, right up there with the Thin Mint Girl Scout cookies I keep hidden in the freezer (shhh! don\'t tell!). I am so happy you updated. I wish I could say that it satisfied my craving for \"It Had to Be You\" but, alas, I am afraid that I find myself just as impatient for the next chappie as I was for this one. I know you are writing more than one story, but I hope you can get another chapter up for this one soon (once you feel better!) before the \"sexy smut\" concentration in my blood drops too low. You know that would NOT be good if that happened! Hee hee!
BIG big hugs and smooches to you for the lovely lemony yumminess! I have just spent half my afternoon reading and reviewing Lorett-written fan fics! Oh HAPPY DAY! I have died and gone to heaven, methinks! All because of you... WHEE!
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhh i\'m SO SORRY you\'re sick! oh i feel bad now. i have an idea! i\'m going to make a new chapter! maybe it will make you feel better? *smiles hopefully* awww. i don\'t like your chapter at all.......................... I LOVE IT! im soooooo happy you decided to update. im fixing my chapter 6 in my story. yeah duh what else am gonna fix? wow im so stupid! luv ya! hope you feel better soon!
SMILE! this IS the happy hour!
SMILE! this IS the happy hour!
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
Talk about worth the wait. That was amazing, i cant find a single thing that is bad or i wish went differently. Sorry i havent read Three Keys - i was going to start it but i have so many other fics on the go and i also have a major piece of work to do as well as my own fics. I hope you feel better soon and dont be stressed! its all good! - this is an amzing chapter and you are a really tallented writer.
Keep up the good work - oh seeing how this is my first review i thought id tell you - i sent the email to all the adresses you gave us and i recieved nothing back in return - dont know what i expected but i was wondering - even though you are permenantly stationed here did you ever get a reason from those evil people at fanfiction.net?
Again hope you get better soon and are feeling happy go lucky again soon too - boy when your in the right mood for this fic you are amazing! i love that mood - can i get pills to get in it? lol
feeds you many cookies as a reward for execllence!!!
Oh on a side note - and hoping this doesnt freak you out is it bad that i was turned on by this story? - really really hot stuff!
Steph x
Talk about worth the wait. That was amazing, i cant find a single thing that is bad or i wish went differently. Sorry i havent read Three Keys - i was going to start it but i have so many other fics on the go and i also have a major piece of work to do as well as my own fics. I hope you feel better soon and dont be stressed! its all good! - this is an amzing chapter and you are a really tallented writer.
Keep up the good work - oh seeing how this is my first review i thought id tell you - i sent the email to all the adresses you gave us and i recieved nothing back in return - dont know what i expected but i was wondering - even though you are permenantly stationed here did you ever get a reason from those evil people at fanfiction.net?
Again hope you get better soon and are feeling happy go lucky again soon too - boy when your in the right mood for this fic you are amazing! i love that mood - can i get pills to get in it? lol
feeds you many cookies as a reward for execllence!!!
Oh on a side note - and hoping this doesnt freak you out is it bad that i was turned on by this story? - really really hot stuff!
Steph x
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loretta MY DARLING!!! BIG HUGE HUG!!!! I was so happy when I saw you had updated. I was jumping up and down I swear to god!! SO sorry to hear you are sick, so I am I, still!! What is with the world these days. Okay on to your amazing chapter.
This is by far my fav chapter so far. It had every single element that makes an amazing story. You had tension, by god did you have tension. I wouldn\'t have been able to survive sitting next to Draco malfoy and not jump him. You write Draco so very sexy, cool, yet very honest as well, I think this is what draws me to your Draco.
i loved the overprotectiveness that Draco revealed while he Harry, and Hermione were speaking. It was so amazing to see his jealousy! You write it so well.
The best part had to be the angel scene. talk about a hot sexy scene. Dear lord I am running for the showers as I type! You are amazing!!!! Made me wish for my own little Draco Malfoy. It was so perfect for Hermione to be Draco\'s Angel. I liked that comparison. He the devil, she his angel. He her corruption, She his salvation. OOOhh I like that, may use it as a title! See look, you have even inspired me my darling!!
Oh lord, damnit, I have to go to dinner now!! I want to sit and gush some more but alas, it must wait. I will def be e-mailin you! I hope you are feeling a tad bit better. take care luv. Ciao Bella!!
Love where you are taking this story! Love, Ally
This is by far my fav chapter so far. It had every single element that makes an amazing story. You had tension, by god did you have tension. I wouldn\'t have been able to survive sitting next to Draco malfoy and not jump him. You write Draco so very sexy, cool, yet very honest as well, I think this is what draws me to your Draco.
i loved the overprotectiveness that Draco revealed while he Harry, and Hermione were speaking. It was so amazing to see his jealousy! You write it so well.
The best part had to be the angel scene. talk about a hot sexy scene. Dear lord I am running for the showers as I type! You are amazing!!!! Made me wish for my own little Draco Malfoy. It was so perfect for Hermione to be Draco\'s Angel. I liked that comparison. He the devil, she his angel. He her corruption, She his salvation. OOOhh I like that, may use it as a title! See look, you have even inspired me my darling!!
Oh lord, damnit, I have to go to dinner now!! I want to sit and gush some more but alas, it must wait. I will def be e-mailin you! I hope you are feeling a tad bit better. take care luv. Ciao Bella!!
Love where you are taking this story! Love, Ally
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello hello hello!
Well, that sure left the room a little warmer! I think I need to go open a window now......
I must say, even though they didn\'t actually HAVE sex, the forplay more than made up for it. Well done! This only makes things even more awaiting for Laurel and Draco.... even if I\'m a huge Hermoine fan. I loved the halo part, I think that symbolically works very well. She is more or less an angel.
Poor Ron though eh? Maybe better luck for him in Three Keys. B/c Hermoine sure as hell better not take Draco away from Laurel! I\'m just j/k, I never know with you! lol :)
I loved how very long that one was, makes up for the wait! And just to let you know, even though FF is being a BITCH, doesn\'t mean that you should ever stop writing b/c you rock at it! I seriously hope that you do this proffesionally one day and I\'ll read that all too! Even up here in Canada, lol. Don\'t ever let someone tell you otherwise.
Now with that said, I anticipate a new chappie soon, so get to it! lol, hugs!!!
~Jenn
Well, that sure left the room a little warmer! I think I need to go open a window now......
I must say, even though they didn\'t actually HAVE sex, the forplay more than made up for it. Well done! This only makes things even more awaiting for Laurel and Draco.... even if I\'m a huge Hermoine fan. I loved the halo part, I think that symbolically works very well. She is more or less an angel.
Poor Ron though eh? Maybe better luck for him in Three Keys. B/c Hermoine sure as hell better not take Draco away from Laurel! I\'m just j/k, I never know with you! lol :)
I loved how very long that one was, makes up for the wait! And just to let you know, even though FF is being a BITCH, doesn\'t mean that you should ever stop writing b/c you rock at it! I seriously hope that you do this proffesionally one day and I\'ll read that all too! Even up here in Canada, lol. Don\'t ever let someone tell you otherwise.
Now with that said, I anticipate a new chappie soon, so get to it! lol, hugs!!!
~Jenn
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES YES! WOOT WOOT! Finally, I couldn\'t wait and MAN AM I HAPPY WITH THE UPDATE. Good Job! I know this is a short review but I\'m tied up with alot of other things. You my dear friend are an excellent writer, with GREAT sex scenes. I mean, I have to struggle to make mines half of what yours is. Ahahah, speaking of that I must be on my way to continue. Love this chapter, I hope you update soon!!!! I\'m hyper, yes I am. That\'s what coffee does to you...woohoo!
Chao!
Chao!