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for It Had To Be You

by lorettcopeland

person lemonade
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Romantic, I\'m still waiting for her to use Ginny\'s gift!! ;D
person Katie
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have only read the first chapter but loved it so much that I decided I had to tell you how awesome it was! Amazing! So sweet! You had me smiling in all the right places.
person Alliekat
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was great. I really enjoy the story. It would have been interesting to see what would have happened if Draco \"chose\" naughty!!!!
person cat
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yahoo! Please send me an email- I LOVE this story!
person DB2020
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was just wonderful. So great, I love the develpment of their relationship, it is decidedly different from most of the others out there. Great writing too, it drew me right in. I love how you have portrayed both Hermione and Draco, and also Harry and Ron. I\'ll be eagerly awaiting future updates. ^_^
person rain
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I reached chapter five. And that sucks because now it\'s over. I seem to be using the word love alot in these reviews but I can\'t help it. I really did love the way Hermione is hesitant and unsure and how Draco is turned on by that. The angel outfit was cute. And kind of twisted. Some men want you to leave your high heels on, Draco wants her to leave her halo on. But it\'s sweet too, because it kind of signifies that Draco accepts her the way she is and doesn\'t want her to change. She\'s sweet and innocent and he likes her that way.

Rain
person rain
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lor,

I was in the mood for some fluff before bed and thought I\'d pop over and read a little more of this. And I am soooo glad I did. I am so going to go buy a dozen blow pops...one of every flavor just to be sure...and try to find me a gorgeous slytherin of my very own. I really did love that whole scene, the way Hermione didn\'t quite get why Draco wanted her to eat the candy, then sort of catching on and getting a bit more seductive with it. I thought the whole tutoring part was cute too, very sweet chapter.

Rain
person rain
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t identify my last review as a chapter three review. This is for chapter four. Which I loved completely. Draco asking permission to go further was absolutely perfect, I especially liked how he didn\'t presure her to go further. That was so sweet. She said she wasn\'t ready and he respected that. I about died when Hermione asked Draco what he tasted like. I want to know too...

Rain
person Sage
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*groan* It\'s been months! Too damn long! I love this story...I really do. And I\'ll love the author as well if...maybe...just maybe...there would be an update. Soon? Today? Now?? Okay, fine...but soon!

I love the dynamics, I love the characteration (wait...is that a word?? Screw it, you know what I mean) and I love the way you write. Oh, and uh...the scenes are hot...let\'s not forget that one, shall we? Oh! I also like the fact that you have Hermione waiting...I think most times, authors get too inpatient so in turn, Hermione gets too inpatient.

Anyways, yes! Update!...Please!

(I\'m coming back in two weeks to beg. Another week after that to threaten. Make it a month, I\'m finding out where you live and...well, I\'ll explain that part in three weeks. So just don\'t make us wait that long. Please??)
person Sarah
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been looking for this story for days. Okay, maybe just for all of last night but I like to be dramatic. I came here from some story I can\'t remember the name but liked very much. It\'s on my favorites and you probably know who I\'m talking about. Anyway, love this story already. My favorite moment was the snitch from Harry. I actually \"Awwwww\" -ed out loud. Enough babbling, I\'m going on to read the rest! Sarah xx