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for It Had To Be You

by lorettcopeland

schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the best chapter so far in my opinion. Which is hard to come by since they are all such wonderful chapters.
I am a little disappointed that that wasn\'t the night. But I am more than sure, being one of your biggest fans, that you will make it more than right for when the time finally comes.
God! If only we were all lucky to have out first times be... slightly as good as her ALMOST time. But alas... that powers that be didn\'t write our first times as good as you can write thiers.
AWESOME! I love it so much! I\'m so glad that you updated, I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
PEACE Isabel
person Petalsoft
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We all need sappy once in a while... LOL Heh, I\'m really enjoying this story. I don\'t know how she can wait... cause I sure couldn\'t LOL. There is a real sweet vibe with them and also it\'s very sexy. I\'m glad Draco\'s so understanding and patient. Great story.
person ginny-rules-the-wold aka ali
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOO! great job!!! honestly, i\'m JEALOUS! YOUR SUCH A GREAT WRITER!!!!!!! i haven\'t written in a while :\"> writers block, and been pretty busy, i re-wrote like 3 chapters of my story, and yeah. i\'m working on that. My favorite part: dreams are like paper, They are so easy to tear apart, and so very difficult to put back together once they have been scattered into the winds. When you are young, you think you can achieve anything. No dream is too impossible to realize, and rarely do you worry about consequences. Youth fools you into believing that you may defy anyone and remain strong and unaffected. It lulls you into accepting a false truth, thinking if you are blessed enough to find love and foolishly let it go, that it will eventually find its way back to you. But that is not true, Draco. Yes, you can achieve what you desire, but rather than be defiant, be convicted in your goals. Convince others that your dream is worth fighting for, above anything else. And whatever you do, Draco, never, ever, let love slip through your fingers once you find it within your grasp.
that\'s so true. i love it. you rock, and i <3 u!!! ur the nicest person i know! luverz always!!!

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SMILE! this IS the happy hour!!!
person ginny-rules-the-wold aka ali
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
had to write it AGAIN because i\'m stupid. lol WOO! great job!!! honestly, i\'m JEALOUS! YOUR SUCH A GREAT WRITER!!!!!!! i haven\'t written in a while :\"> writers block, and been pretty busy, i re-wrote like 3 chapters of my story, and yeah. i\'m working on that. My favorite part: dreams are like paper, They are so easy to tear apart, and so very difficult to put back together once they have been scattered into the winds. When you are young, you think you can achieve anything. No dream is too impossible to realize, and rarely do you worry about consequences. Youth fools you into believing that you may defy anyone and remain strong and unaffected. It lulls you into accepting a false truth, thinking if you are blessed enough to find love and foolishly let it go, that it will eventually find its way back to you. But that is not true, Draco. Yes, you can achieve what you desire, but rather than be defiant, be convicted in your goals. Convince others that your dream is worth fighting for, above anything else. And whatever you do, Draco, never, ever, let love slip through your fingers once you find it within your grasp.
that\'s so true. i love it. you rock, and i luverz u!!! ur the nicest person i know!!!! luverz always

-ali

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SMILE! this IS the happy hour!
person Tinkerbelle
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM

girl..... so worth the wait!!!! Please continue!!!
person Tamar
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aah, I\'m sorry! I admit it! I\'m a silent reader! I\'ve been reading this since... last week. And I\'ve read all of the chapters, and swooned at all the appropriate times, and d/led the songs that were mentioned, and laughed and ... I didn\'t comment! I\'m sorry!!!!! Please forgive me!

But! To rectify the situation, I am commenting now. And I feel compelled to tell you that I LOVE THIS STORY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY much. I LOVE it. It\'s wonderful. It\'s cute, sweet, fluffy, hot, and WELL WRITTEN. I know what it\'s like to want validation for the things you work hard on, so I am giving you yours. You have a flare, quite simply put. This story is captivating. You have eloquence, and imagery, interesting dialogue, a fun plot... It\'s great! I commend you, I sincerely do. You write like I never could, and though I am jealous, I\'m also happy to have discovered this story, so that I may enjoy it.

Please continue writing!

Tamar
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see that it has been quite some time since you last updated and it almost scares me... I hope nothing has happened with your account or your computer to prevent you from updated.
I just love this story so much. It is one of the best I have ever read and I adore your style.
I am pretty sure that my review alone will not be what makes you update... so I sincerely hope that everyone elses is giving you the push you need.
I hope to see a new chapter to this wonderful story not too far down the road.
I am now a devoted fan to this story. AWESOME!!
PEACE Isa
person grace
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are SUCH an amazing writer! You describe their relationship so well. This is quite possibly the BEST draco/hermione story I\'ve ever read. You\'re doing a FANTASTIC job. keep up the awsome work.
person bubbles
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really quite frustrated with you. While I love your story and how you write, I find it rather irresponsible of you to claim that your 6th chapter is soon on its way and about to me posted immediately when it has been days. I think it\'s rather unneccessary and raises your readers blood pressure quite efficiently.
person Katie
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness! Wonderfully written! Kick a** smut! You and your story rock! Keep going!