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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
girl, when are you going to update? I\'m dying here. HURRY!
I NEED MORE!
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I NEED MORE!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Private lessons from Draco? - Grin. Yeah, me too.\"
Oh L! You CRACK me up - seriously. . . . Yeah, I was laughing so much in this chapter for various reasons . . . All that build up to sex, but it was actually leading to flying . . . hahaha, had me fooled. . . . The painting of Ophelia sounds absolutely gorgeous, I could really picture it and I felt instantly sad for her. . . . Gorgeous imagery during the flying scene . . . Your Draco is SO cheesy! I mean, REALLY corning it up there. But the knight in shining leather pants suits him in this story because it is sickly sweet, like you say.
And the almost-sex scene . . . well you know me and sex scenes and stuff, I usually skip over it . . . but I read yours and I must congratulate you on excellent use of proper anatomical nomenclature. I HATE the word that substitutes for rooster (see, I hate it that much I won\'t say it) and I was so pleased by the maturity you show in this story - it\'s exemplorary, really, and with due reason - alongside your fun, childlike energy, you\'re still a mature woman and know what\'s what!
So let\'s teach them kiddies how to do real fan fiction, hmm?
Love you lots doll - so glad I finally got the chance to read this chapter, after like, forever!
Always,
SJ
P.S. My only criticism - the \'thoughts\' distracted me and confused me at times when they were right next to dialogue.
P.P.S. The title ALWAYS reminds me of \'A League of Their Own\' . . .
\"It had to be you-you-you-you-you . . . . I\'m singin\' to Nelson! Ain\'t I baby?\"
\"You sure are. . .\"
HA - fun.
Oh L! You CRACK me up - seriously. . . . Yeah, I was laughing so much in this chapter for various reasons . . . All that build up to sex, but it was actually leading to flying . . . hahaha, had me fooled. . . . The painting of Ophelia sounds absolutely gorgeous, I could really picture it and I felt instantly sad for her. . . . Gorgeous imagery during the flying scene . . . Your Draco is SO cheesy! I mean, REALLY corning it up there. But the knight in shining leather pants suits him in this story because it is sickly sweet, like you say.
And the almost-sex scene . . . well you know me and sex scenes and stuff, I usually skip over it . . . but I read yours and I must congratulate you on excellent use of proper anatomical nomenclature. I HATE the word that substitutes for rooster (see, I hate it that much I won\'t say it) and I was so pleased by the maturity you show in this story - it\'s exemplorary, really, and with due reason - alongside your fun, childlike energy, you\'re still a mature woman and know what\'s what!
So let\'s teach them kiddies how to do real fan fiction, hmm?
Love you lots doll - so glad I finally got the chance to read this chapter, after like, forever!
Always,
SJ
P.S. My only criticism - the \'thoughts\' distracted me and confused me at times when they were right next to dialogue.
P.P.S. The title ALWAYS reminds me of \'A League of Their Own\' . . .
\"It had to be you-you-you-you-you . . . . I\'m singin\' to Nelson! Ain\'t I baby?\"
\"You sure are. . .\"
HA - fun.
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s been awhile since I\'ve been able to get back and read this and it was well worth the wait (chemistry.. ick) LOL But it was wonderful. as I\'ve said amny times before you\'ve got a nack for writting.. keep it up.. *ish impatient for the next chappie but will wait.. somehow... LOL
~The Lynster/Icy_princess
Krysta Lyn
~The Lynster/Icy_princess
Krysta Lyn
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! First of all and so that I don\'t forget later on, INCLUDE ME ON THE UPDATE LIST... please.
I believe I told you some time ago that I didn\'t like fics with perfect Dracos or perfect Hermiones. And now, as I re-read this story, I\'m amazed at how much I had previously read (maybe chapter 4)... and honestly, I didn\'t like it. I hope I even said \"sorry\".
And now, a few months after that, I proudly see you\'ve been nominated and come back to give myself a second chance to see what other people had seen in your story that I had missed. I read chapter 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6. I took notes. I printed chapter 6 and took it home, reading while driving (don\'t yell at me, it\'s your fault), underlined some paragraphs, told a couple of friends about the story... and just one question remains: WAS I OUT OF MY F.... MIND WHEN I READ IT THE FIRST TIME?
I can\'t believe that I didn\'t like it. I just can\'t. If you ask me now, I could give you a thousand paragraphs I like. Why didn\'t I see them back then? I have just one possible reason: temporary madness.
Lorett, this story is fantastic. It\'s sweet, it\'s hot as hell, it\'s endearing, it\'s funny. You\'ve deprived me of sleep. I refuse to EVER go to sleep again unless Draco is included in my bed. I love the smut scenes. LOVE them. I loved the Ophelia scene. I loved the blow-pop scene. I like the way they\'re trying to keep it a secret ... and failing.
I love Ginny, Harry and Ron. Have all of them noticed or just Ginny? What will Ron say? What will he do? With that terrible temper of his... I can only imagine.
I have an undecided mind on whether I support Hermione\'s decision to keep her virginity. I\'ve never understood that. I mean, his fingers have been inside her. His mouth has been everywhere. What much more is there left to it? I\'ve never understood girls that go THAT far with a guy, but refuse to go all the way. In my way of thinking, if you\'re planning to stay a virgin... then no rubbing, and absolutely no hands under the clothes. If you\'re prepared to see a naked guy, and to let a guy see you naked... then why stop? Don\'t misunderstand me. I like your story. And it includes a hestitating Hermione. I\'m just stating my point of view. Last chapter was agony for Draco. SOOOO damn close. And the answer was \"not yet\". Aaaargh! How many guys can take that?
It may also mean that I secretly admire those girls for having some sense of will and control of themselves even in such moments... Maybe I envy that. But really, can somebody explain to me the difference between what they have been doing these last chapters and \"going all the way\"?????
Back to some more... literary conversation... I\'m just surprised that you can write 2 Dracos. The one in Keys and this one. I know how much in love you\'re with him (aren\'t we all?), and they\'re both handsome and sexy.... but even so, they\'re different. I think of them as having different backgrounds... Does that make any sense?
Anyways, I love your story (had I already said that?) and will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Much love,
accio
I believe I told you some time ago that I didn\'t like fics with perfect Dracos or perfect Hermiones. And now, as I re-read this story, I\'m amazed at how much I had previously read (maybe chapter 4)... and honestly, I didn\'t like it. I hope I even said \"sorry\".
And now, a few months after that, I proudly see you\'ve been nominated and come back to give myself a second chance to see what other people had seen in your story that I had missed. I read chapter 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6. I took notes. I printed chapter 6 and took it home, reading while driving (don\'t yell at me, it\'s your fault), underlined some paragraphs, told a couple of friends about the story... and just one question remains: WAS I OUT OF MY F.... MIND WHEN I READ IT THE FIRST TIME?
I can\'t believe that I didn\'t like it. I just can\'t. If you ask me now, I could give you a thousand paragraphs I like. Why didn\'t I see them back then? I have just one possible reason: temporary madness.
Lorett, this story is fantastic. It\'s sweet, it\'s hot as hell, it\'s endearing, it\'s funny. You\'ve deprived me of sleep. I refuse to EVER go to sleep again unless Draco is included in my bed. I love the smut scenes. LOVE them. I loved the Ophelia scene. I loved the blow-pop scene. I like the way they\'re trying to keep it a secret ... and failing.
I love Ginny, Harry and Ron. Have all of them noticed or just Ginny? What will Ron say? What will he do? With that terrible temper of his... I can only imagine.
I have an undecided mind on whether I support Hermione\'s decision to keep her virginity. I\'ve never understood that. I mean, his fingers have been inside her. His mouth has been everywhere. What much more is there left to it? I\'ve never understood girls that go THAT far with a guy, but refuse to go all the way. In my way of thinking, if you\'re planning to stay a virgin... then no rubbing, and absolutely no hands under the clothes. If you\'re prepared to see a naked guy, and to let a guy see you naked... then why stop? Don\'t misunderstand me. I like your story. And it includes a hestitating Hermione. I\'m just stating my point of view. Last chapter was agony for Draco. SOOOO damn close. And the answer was \"not yet\". Aaaargh! How many guys can take that?
It may also mean that I secretly admire those girls for having some sense of will and control of themselves even in such moments... Maybe I envy that. But really, can somebody explain to me the difference between what they have been doing these last chapters and \"going all the way\"?????
Back to some more... literary conversation... I\'m just surprised that you can write 2 Dracos. The one in Keys and this one. I know how much in love you\'re with him (aren\'t we all?), and they\'re both handsome and sexy.... but even so, they\'re different. I think of them as having different backgrounds... Does that make any sense?
Anyways, I love your story (had I already said that?) and will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Much love,
accio
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I NEED MORE!!!
YOU COULD ALSO MAKE RON DO SOMETHING STUPID IF HE CATCHES THEM OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH THAT THERE HAS TO BE MORE!!!!
THERE JUST HAS TO BE!!!
ANYWAY THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AMAZING STORY!!!!
GOOD LUCK WITH WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
I SAID IT CHAPTERS NOT CHAPTER!!!!!!
YOU COULD ALSO MAKE RON DO SOMETHING STUPID IF HE CATCHES THEM OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH THAT THERE HAS TO BE MORE!!!!
THERE JUST HAS TO BE!!!
ANYWAY THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AMAZING STORY!!!!
GOOD LUCK WITH WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
I SAID IT CHAPTERS NOT CHAPTER!!!!!!
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on!
i haVE BEEN WAITING FOR AGES!
I NEED MORE!!
i\'ve read this fab story loads of times and never got sick of it, please write some more i can\'t wait!
you are a FANTASTICILY GREAT writer!
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!!!!
i haVE BEEN WAITING FOR AGES!
I NEED MORE!!
i\'ve read this fab story loads of times and never got sick of it, please write some more i can\'t wait!
you are a FANTASTICILY GREAT writer!
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!!!!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omG, this is awesome. i really want draco to actually tell hermione that he luvs her tho = ] *cheesy grin*
update soon!!!!!
update soon!!!!!
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just read your story, first to last chapter, and I LOVED it! You are amazing! Most stories I read which are NC-17 are completely about sex. There\'s just no other way to put it. They rush over the, shall we say, foreplay, and detail the actuall sex. While I\'m not trying to diss the stories which do that, I also think that there are a great multitude of opertunities for description to be focused on instead of JUST THE SEX!!! You have proven my theory with this story, so I take my hat off to you. *takes hat off and does a bow... kindof* So, anyway. Thanks so much for allowing this story to be on the net and I hope you update as soon as possible! You are truly an amazing author and you should take your writing farther! Your way with words is hard to describe... it\'s just... like reading heaven. You\'re a natural and I can\'t wait to read more of your work! Update soon! ~Caitlyn, PhoenixCGandAC
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot and awesome story! Love the sexual tension and great story telling. Can\'t wait for the next chapter! I know when they use the potion it\'s going to be explosive ;-)