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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
K this is going to be quite the review I hope.
Chpater one, Amazing, You did a really good job writing feelings and emotions, and you never left anything out, you explianed how they got to a tentative friendship without them saying anything that takes skill.
Chapter two, Ok I cant really tell you what happened, in any of the chapter because when i read i hate checking out what chapter I am on, I read as much as i can then when theres no more to read i get sad, ANYWAYS! Overall this story is going really really good, I like it how you keep it so hermoine still has morals and doesnt just become a big sex crazed whore, and gives into Draco at the first encounter like sooo many stoties do, so cudo's on that, Second of all The way you explaine in such detail about feelings and emotions of your characters doesnt leave much room for asking well what happened to make them do that? It is a really easy to follow story.. Then Chapter 7, Im glad you never had it like and boom they lived happily ever after got married had kids blah blah blah, I am very glad you threw a bit of conflict and drama in there, hooray for you! Now, I will be very glad if you update some more, and quickly! I wanna know what happens, although it could be obvious, but with your quirkie notes there could be a few more twists yet to come. anyways Thank you for writing, it keeps my brain entertained!
Star
Chpater one, Amazing, You did a really good job writing feelings and emotions, and you never left anything out, you explianed how they got to a tentative friendship without them saying anything that takes skill.
Chapter two, Ok I cant really tell you what happened, in any of the chapter because when i read i hate checking out what chapter I am on, I read as much as i can then when theres no more to read i get sad, ANYWAYS! Overall this story is going really really good, I like it how you keep it so hermoine still has morals and doesnt just become a big sex crazed whore, and gives into Draco at the first encounter like sooo many stoties do, so cudo's on that, Second of all The way you explaine in such detail about feelings and emotions of your characters doesnt leave much room for asking well what happened to make them do that? It is a really easy to follow story.. Then Chapter 7, Im glad you never had it like and boom they lived happily ever after got married had kids blah blah blah, I am very glad you threw a bit of conflict and drama in there, hooray for you! Now, I will be very glad if you update some more, and quickly! I wanna know what happens, although it could be obvious, but with your quirkie notes there could be a few more twists yet to come. anyways Thank you for writing, it keeps my brain entertained!
Star
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Its about time!!! I really really really love your story; and such angst for Draco and Hermione! Good reading times dude; I so look forward to more!
Liz/Tink
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! It's wonderfully written and I really hope you'll continue to write it!!
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 NOW !!! Why did they have to make everything so complicated??? Harry and Ron are just stupid... Hermione and Draco = forever
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omgosh! You have to update sooner than this last chapter...I cannot wait 3 months for what happenes next. I'll die without it lol! Its been amazing so far! Please update!
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bah! it's so good! i need more now! You had me there at the beginning of chapter 7, i thought they really did it! tricky dream. can't wait for more!
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story! the grammer and spelling is perfect, it's good enough to publish it some day!
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww, thats my boo draco
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God... yeah, this is the kind of lover I'd like to have! Any girl would like to have! Your writing is just fabulous, I believe I'M so going to need a cold shower now as well *grin* Can't wait for more!!!
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HURRY UP AND CONTINUE!!!!! HAHAHHAHAHA I love this story