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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will be typing the review as I go so as not to leave out any points! So shall we embark on the voyage that is chapter 36?!?! :
OOOOh a Snape chapter, how fun!! I LOVE how you had Maggie accuse Snape of flirting as he was sending her a death glare! Such a brilliant reaction to our poor professor! Made me laugh to picture Snape actually trying to flirt!
OOOOh a Snape chapter, how fun!! I LOVE how you had Maggie accuse Snape of flirting as he was sending her a death glare! Such a brilliant reaction to our poor professor! Made me laugh to picture Snape actually trying to flirt!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah Chapter 35!
COMPLETELY forgot about Leo Zabini! Reason I love him is cause my grandfather's name is Leo (#my dad's dad!) Anyway God I love your Lucius darling. He is just so amazingly evil yet dashing at the same time. Oh and the signing of the papers in blood!?! Love that scene, makes it really real. Binds Draco not only to the contract but to his new cause!
Okay eagerly rushing forward to the next chapter!!
Love, Ally
COMPLETELY forgot about Leo Zabini! Reason I love him is cause my grandfather's name is Leo (#my dad's dad!) Anyway God I love your Lucius darling. He is just so amazingly evil yet dashing at the same time. Oh and the signing of the papers in blood!?! Love that scene, makes it really real. Binds Draco not only to the contract but to his new cause!
Okay eagerly rushing forward to the next chapter!!
Love, Ally
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really do like your characterization of Narcissa! Sometimes she seems so flat--too whiny, too spineless or abused...but I definitely like her character in this story. She's such an interesting diachotemy. Powerful--but at the same time vulnerable; sometimes seeming submissive and almost broken, but at the same time in control and fiercely protective of her son. The family interaction in this chapter was a really interesting read. Awesome!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am just about certain that i will absolutely devistated if you don\'t update soon, i really hope you do update soon! i\'ll be on the lookout :)
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Lorett!
Just read your message and came to check that I had indeed reviewed- and I discovered that I had been remiss in reviewing your latest chapters! So...
The tension between Narcissa/Snape/Lucius/Maggie (granted not in all combinations) is killing me! I\'m upset that I sort of feel bad for Lucius when he is so clearly posing a threat to my darling Draco! The Narcissa and Lucius chapter shook things up for me and I\'m finding it hard to form distinct impressions. Do we hate Lucius? Pity him? Admire his dangerous sexiness from a distance while spurning him? I suppose that is part of the beauty of your writing- it\'s the depth of the characters.
I have a HUGE crush on Draco. Not crush. Obsession. If he was a tangible person, he would currently have at least one stalker, er, admirer. He\'s so intense, daring, intelligent, single-minded- just think what it would be like to have all of that in a Draco-shaped package, and for all of it to be focused on that one special girl...
I am really enjoying all the backstory with the older characters as well. My curiosity has been piqued.
Ron and Hermione: I love the way you are doing this! It\'s such a sweet side. And I\'m happy to say that I no longer feel angst-ridden for my darling Harry. Draco may be my preference, but Harry is a close second and I can \'t tell you how relieved I am that you are taking care of my sweet green-eyed darling.
So... I am now reserving my ringside seat for the Draco/Lucius showdown, though I will be biting my nails through the entire thing!
MWAP! Of course I\'ve been reading this! I would never NOT read something you\'ve written. You\'re my celebrity writer remember? Sorry I\'m late in reviewing! (hugs you)
Cat
Just read your message and came to check that I had indeed reviewed- and I discovered that I had been remiss in reviewing your latest chapters! So...
The tension between Narcissa/Snape/Lucius/Maggie (granted not in all combinations) is killing me! I\'m upset that I sort of feel bad for Lucius when he is so clearly posing a threat to my darling Draco! The Narcissa and Lucius chapter shook things up for me and I\'m finding it hard to form distinct impressions. Do we hate Lucius? Pity him? Admire his dangerous sexiness from a distance while spurning him? I suppose that is part of the beauty of your writing- it\'s the depth of the characters.
I have a HUGE crush on Draco. Not crush. Obsession. If he was a tangible person, he would currently have at least one stalker, er, admirer. He\'s so intense, daring, intelligent, single-minded- just think what it would be like to have all of that in a Draco-shaped package, and for all of it to be focused on that one special girl...
I am really enjoying all the backstory with the older characters as well. My curiosity has been piqued.
Ron and Hermione: I love the way you are doing this! It\'s such a sweet side. And I\'m happy to say that I no longer feel angst-ridden for my darling Harry. Draco may be my preference, but Harry is a close second and I can \'t tell you how relieved I am that you are taking care of my sweet green-eyed darling.
So... I am now reserving my ringside seat for the Draco/Lucius showdown, though I will be biting my nails through the entire thing!
MWAP! Of course I\'ve been reading this! I would never NOT read something you\'ve written. You\'re my celebrity writer remember? Sorry I\'m late in reviewing! (hugs you)
Cat
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well im back again finally after finding out were you went after fanfiction unceremoniously kicked you off their site - twice!! and iv bin catchin up on your awesome story and may i say - i love it BRAVO.. well i cant w8 till you update again soon. i just love the way you write its so natural and fluent almost like another language. but your enraptured all the time. i feel as though i know the characters personally just by reading about them. your NO1# fan. Love Tara xxxxxxxxxxx
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rock! I love the storyline......but I anxiously await for the updates.....add me to your listing/followers!! tonkatrish@yahoo.com
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaahhhh! Consumed by jealousy of Laurel!
I LOVED the scene in the club- so much hotness. Draco will always be my secret obsession, er, that is to say, my favorite character, but I do love a sexy Harry or Ron as well. I am waiting with bated breath to find out what will happen.
Will there be an attack? Will Laurel be able to withstand the heat of Draco\'s sex appeal? I shall now continue my reading- just wanted to tell you that it\'s SO GOOD!
I LOVED the scene in the club- so much hotness. Draco will always be my secret obsession, er, that is to say, my favorite character, but I do love a sexy Harry or Ron as well. I am waiting with bated breath to find out what will happen.
Will there be an attack? Will Laurel be able to withstand the heat of Draco\'s sex appeal? I shall now continue my reading- just wanted to tell you that it\'s SO GOOD!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lorett!
I just finished the chapter where Laurel and Draco first dance. Sigh... I don\'t remember who was talking about the \"Awww\" factor (I think it was Vashka) yesterday- but this chapter has it in spades. Her trust and reaction to him just emphasize how strong and manly and handsome and powerful and... I suppose that I should stop now before the full-fledged tirade on all of Draco\'s traits begins.
Suffice it to say that right now I am melting... it\'s so romantic! *Hugs you for making me so happy*
Lilycat
I just finished the chapter where Laurel and Draco first dance. Sigh... I don\'t remember who was talking about the \"Awww\" factor (I think it was Vashka) yesterday- but this chapter has it in spades. Her trust and reaction to him just emphasize how strong and manly and handsome and powerful and... I suppose that I should stop now before the full-fledged tirade on all of Draco\'s traits begins.
Suffice it to say that right now I am melting... it\'s so romantic! *Hugs you for making me so happy*
Lilycat
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"At that Laurel jumped, her eyes widening,