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for The Three Keys

by lorettcopeland

person N. Cavigliano
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, that was worth the long wait. After reading that I feel like it's a whole new day, so refreshed. I'll be looking out for the new chapter!
person dracosgal
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i totally was freaking out when i saw you updated!!!!!! this ROCKED my world. what a bloody fantastic chapter. i was so crying for draco. we need more harry too. can not wait for the next chapter! kisses to you - dg
person speechless
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. I don't even know where to begin. I love the fact that you list all your spells at the bottom of the story. Its a neat touch and I look forward to knowing what the heck they're saying when the spells go a flying. I thought this was a very tender chapter. I didn't think it was that dark, but it was powerful and emotional and captivating. Well done. I was reading this all day long. Had to go back a few chapters, because I started reading this a few months ago in wandering through the HP fics and had to work my way back here. Great job. Chaper well done. Story well done. Can't wait for the next one.
person hp luvr
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WELL WORTH THE LONGGGG WAIT. Please don't keep us waiting so long for the next update. HP LUVR 4 EVER!
person LindseyL
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I'm liking this story. Really cool. I'm on chapter 15. I'll review again soon. Lindsey L
person SlytherinsWench
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic and wonderful and so very dark. I'm pleased to see you exploring new avenues as a writer and taking that leap with these characters. I know dark and despairing is not your chosen poison, but this was very well written. And I really like how you just let the story flow and followed where it would go. There was such ease with the transisitions, and Draco had some great lines that really made the reader connect with him, as well as displaying those facets about him that we have all come to see as so very Draco. He's developing and growing as a person, he's redeemable, but he's still Draco to the core.

Lorett, my darling, my lovely, this was worth every second that we had to wait. I couldn't believe how fast the chapter went. I was so engrossed that before I knew it, I was at the end and left salivating for more.

It's been most impressive to me, to see how you've changed as a writer and as a person from the first chapter of this grand epic to this one. The characters have developed and changed with you and I feel priveleged to have been able to share that.

Anyway, much love to you.

And what's wrong with all of you non-reviewing bastards? Show my girl some love!!! She's wonderful. :)
person RahNee
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Darling Lorett, you already know what I think of this chapter (and no, "Thank Heaven it's finally posted" is NOT the first thought that comes to mind!). Congratulations on grappling with and writing a dark and deeply emotional chapter. Lord knows I know it wasn't easy! I'm just so stinking proud of you for hanging in there and sticking with it despite all the distractions and difficulty Real Life threw at you! And for not ripping your hair out in the process. You still have your hair, don't you?

Anyway, I love you tons and am proud to be your beta and honored to be your friend, lovey! And thanks for the fabulous plug for "A New Definition of Family!" (Notice how I got another plug in just now? Shameless-Hussies-R-Us!) I LOVE YOU! MWAP!

Ronnie
person hurry up
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up, I've been waiting for ages for a new chapter!
person Lynne
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I was sooooooooo upset that ff.net removed ur story. I was like 'wtf? y did they do that?' anyways... i love the new chapter, update soon!! i gotta tell u, everytime i read that bathroom scene between laurel & harry, it just makes me sooooooo happy!!! LOL anyways update soon please!!!! <3 Lynne
person Rose
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO WAY was that your first fanfic!!! I dont believe you!!! It was amazing