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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wow wow wow. I\'m speechless. That chapter grabbed my eyeballs and I couldn\'t stop reading until I got to the end. I don\'t think I even blinked! The repressed Narcissa is gone and powerful Narcissa is here and WOW. I loved this chapter. I think it\'s because Narcissa\'s character made a huge leap, and I\'m apprehensive about what havok powerful Narcissa will wreak. But yea for her to embrace the mama bear role and realize that Lucius is too selfish to love her no matter how much she loves him.
Ummm...I can\'t seem to get to Chapter 15! Not going to panic or anything, but, um, can\'t get there. Must be a glitch. Please be a glitch! I NEED MY 2-FURS! Sorry, but I started to panic.
Ah well, even if I can read only one chappie tonight, it was a bright star in my evening. Thanks so much, Lorett dear! Hugs and smooches to ya!
PS: Not to be a nag or anything, \'cause I know the creative process is a fickle one, but I need a little steamy, sexy romance fiction update in my system soon before I pass out from \"It Had to Be You\" withdrawl. No pressure or anything, but the room is starting to spin and my vision is going gray...
Ummm...I can\'t seem to get to Chapter 15! Not going to panic or anything, but, um, can\'t get there. Must be a glitch. Please be a glitch! I NEED MY 2-FURS! Sorry, but I started to panic.
Ah well, even if I can read only one chappie tonight, it was a bright star in my evening. Thanks so much, Lorett dear! Hugs and smooches to ya!
PS: Not to be a nag or anything, \'cause I know the creative process is a fickle one, but I need a little steamy, sexy romance fiction update in my system soon before I pass out from \"It Had to Be You\" withdrawl. No pressure or anything, but the room is starting to spin and my vision is going gray...
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya, darling --
Ah....great new (old) chappies!!!! Your are completely right....THE ANGST IS SO MUCH FUN IN THESE EARLY ONES!!!! Fun for the reader, too. (Not that that\'s saying much...your stories are always fun to read.) Hm....now for the observations. Lots of \'em. If I can remember them, that is. Heh heh....getting faulty in my old age. Dear me.
Okay, Chappie 14. I personally thought that was AMAZING. Really really really really really well done. LIke, the urgency and onimous-ity (I have no idea what the noun form of that is) was you at your best. You nailed her heart break and her admission of her love. I mean....wow. Seriously amazing. The sad thing is that she really WON\'T know whether this is the right thing to do or not. I mean, like you mentioned, she had never really believed in the prophecy in the first place, and suddenly she finds pieces of it coming true. In our universe without magic, it\'s hard to believe in these superstitions, and though she may not have much contact with the outside world, I\'m sure modern concepts leak in. Somehow. But that sudden conviction sprung out of the love she has for her son was really powerful, especially when coupled with her admitted passion for Lucius. Love. Real, true, blind love that leads her hand to strike. Ooh...spooky. The irony kills. Literally.
Chapter 15 was excellent right after Ch. 14, just because it relaxed a little. Of course, the stakes (steaks!! yum!! whoa...just had dinner. Excuse me...hem hem) were just as high, but they seemed less intense. I dunno exactly what, but it worked. That\'s what counts. Thanks to Rah-Nee (thank you, thou glorious review god!) we seee a much more powerful pairing. I personally think that if you hadn\'t updated the two together, a lot of the passion wouldn\'t have translated to the reader. And, oh God, Draco is SO sexy when he\'s disturbed. Yum. All mine. GET AWAY!!! MINE!! MY DRACO!! NOT YOURS. Fine. I\'ll share. No, I don\'t care if you\'re the author. He\'s still mine. Anywho, back to you. Yeah, so the whole thing with Harry, too, is tres ironic. (A lot of irony in these chaps, si? Or maybe I\'m just on crack...who knows? I feel all the stares coming from your readers....heh heh. Hi. I really AM sane. Most of the time.) Right. Ah, shoot. I\'m supposed to sign off. Hope I gushed enough to please your lordship!! Talk to you soon, dearie!!
Oh, and I had a question about YOUR review thingie you sent me!! The whole \"Last Time\" thing....I think it\'s a good idea - a great one - but I\'m not quite sure how to put it in....a little help perhaps? I mean, I sort of have three different plots (which yes, do tie in together. And will be explained soon...I promise. I\'m writing the chapter before the beginning explanation right now) so I\'m not quite sure where to put it. I assume you mean the HG/DM plot for the \"Last Time\" blurb, but should I put it in before the Fate scene? Or after?? Well, I\'ll try before and you can tell me what you think. Si? And I guess I\'ll have to feel around for the amount of thoughts to put in the flashback thing, but you can let me know whether I\'m doing it right or not on my next update. Which should be this Friday. (Crossing fingers!! I\'ve got on a pretty regular schedule.) OHH....and the whole confusion thing. About half of my regular reviewers were confused (mainly you, Alexis, and Taintless) so I\'ll explain a little in the A/N. Just bear with me...you\'re going to have to think a bit (it\'s pretty obvious when you think about it, and the next chapter should expose a little more), but it will actually be partially explained in about four chaps. (Fun ones though!! I\'m really excited about them.) Some of it won\'t be explained till the end, but by then you will probably have figured it out. In my plot twists, sometimes you just have to take my writing literally. I know, sometimes really hard to tell because I use all those metaphors and analogies and poetical crap. I\'ll try to do better!! I promise!!
Okay, I really have to go know, especially if I have any chance at all of using it this Friday to post. Love you, darling, and am so glad that so many reviewers followed you over!! Talk to you soon!!
~Alison
Ah....great new (old) chappies!!!! Your are completely right....THE ANGST IS SO MUCH FUN IN THESE EARLY ONES!!!! Fun for the reader, too. (Not that that\'s saying much...your stories are always fun to read.) Hm....now for the observations. Lots of \'em. If I can remember them, that is. Heh heh....getting faulty in my old age. Dear me.
Okay, Chappie 14. I personally thought that was AMAZING. Really really really really really well done. LIke, the urgency and onimous-ity (I have no idea what the noun form of that is) was you at your best. You nailed her heart break and her admission of her love. I mean....wow. Seriously amazing. The sad thing is that she really WON\'T know whether this is the right thing to do or not. I mean, like you mentioned, she had never really believed in the prophecy in the first place, and suddenly she finds pieces of it coming true. In our universe without magic, it\'s hard to believe in these superstitions, and though she may not have much contact with the outside world, I\'m sure modern concepts leak in. Somehow. But that sudden conviction sprung out of the love she has for her son was really powerful, especially when coupled with her admitted passion for Lucius. Love. Real, true, blind love that leads her hand to strike. Ooh...spooky. The irony kills. Literally.
Chapter 15 was excellent right after Ch. 14, just because it relaxed a little. Of course, the stakes (steaks!! yum!! whoa...just had dinner. Excuse me...hem hem) were just as high, but they seemed less intense. I dunno exactly what, but it worked. That\'s what counts. Thanks to Rah-Nee (thank you, thou glorious review god!) we seee a much more powerful pairing. I personally think that if you hadn\'t updated the two together, a lot of the passion wouldn\'t have translated to the reader. And, oh God, Draco is SO sexy when he\'s disturbed. Yum. All mine. GET AWAY!!! MINE!! MY DRACO!! NOT YOURS. Fine. I\'ll share. No, I don\'t care if you\'re the author. He\'s still mine. Anywho, back to you. Yeah, so the whole thing with Harry, too, is tres ironic. (A lot of irony in these chaps, si? Or maybe I\'m just on crack...who knows? I feel all the stares coming from your readers....heh heh. Hi. I really AM sane. Most of the time.) Right. Ah, shoot. I\'m supposed to sign off. Hope I gushed enough to please your lordship!! Talk to you soon, dearie!!
Oh, and I had a question about YOUR review thingie you sent me!! The whole \"Last Time\" thing....I think it\'s a good idea - a great one - but I\'m not quite sure how to put it in....a little help perhaps? I mean, I sort of have three different plots (which yes, do tie in together. And will be explained soon...I promise. I\'m writing the chapter before the beginning explanation right now) so I\'m not quite sure where to put it. I assume you mean the HG/DM plot for the \"Last Time\" blurb, but should I put it in before the Fate scene? Or after?? Well, I\'ll try before and you can tell me what you think. Si? And I guess I\'ll have to feel around for the amount of thoughts to put in the flashback thing, but you can let me know whether I\'m doing it right or not on my next update. Which should be this Friday. (Crossing fingers!! I\'ve got on a pretty regular schedule.) OHH....and the whole confusion thing. About half of my regular reviewers were confused (mainly you, Alexis, and Taintless) so I\'ll explain a little in the A/N. Just bear with me...you\'re going to have to think a bit (it\'s pretty obvious when you think about it, and the next chapter should expose a little more), but it will actually be partially explained in about four chaps. (Fun ones though!! I\'m really excited about them.) Some of it won\'t be explained till the end, but by then you will probably have figured it out. In my plot twists, sometimes you just have to take my writing literally. I know, sometimes really hard to tell because I use all those metaphors and analogies and poetical crap. I\'ll try to do better!! I promise!!
Okay, I really have to go know, especially if I have any chance at all of using it this Friday to post. Love you, darling, and am so glad that so many reviewers followed you over!! Talk to you soon!!
~Alison
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could I pass up a fic like this? hehe
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Do you know how long I have been looking for this fic @ fanfiction.net?! For the past month!!!!!! I almost believed that I must have dreamt about reading a story like this and my god! I thought I was going insane... haha... Oki, well I\'m gonna start reading from where I left off now, so \'til my next review!
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Put me on your alert list! Augh! I love this fic so much. It\'s hard to find good Harry Potter OC fics out there. Muahz! :) Tom Felton is a total babe. I wish I could tie him up on my bed forever. ::sigh::
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m here!! Sorry it took so long to get over here, but I\'ve been knocked out for a few days (lol)...but I\'m caught up now, and WOW!!! *grins* I still love it! Can\'t wait for the next chappie!
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sigh...how i love the chapters coming up...and ive officially realized that i thinki have a thing for blondes...and its all their fault...o well...keep it coming!!! cant wait for my fav scene!!! which i obv cant give away here so ill wait
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well Lorett, you know I\'d follow you anywhere so never fear! I also sent a few terrorizing letters to FF.net I can\'t believe they did that to youAGAIN! What a bunch of asses. Well, you\'re great and you ALREADY KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR STORY! This is one awesome chapter. Draco is so amazingly written that I totally believe its him! Cheer up luv, the reviews will come! I SHOCKED that not more people have reviewed alredy, but they will. If you go back to ff.net let me know, I\'ll follow you there too!
Love, M
Love, M
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!!! WHERE IS CHAPTER 15????!!!! I\'ve been reading this story in the past couple of days, and I really like it. I decided to review this time to let you know that I think this has a great plot. I love your characterization of the whole Malfoy family. Narcissa is really great. In other fictions she is portrayed as an obnoxious snob that relies on her husband\'s reputation and power, but she has no power of her own. I like your version of her better. Please post chapter 15 soon. I can\'t wait to see what happens.
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww gotta love cocky draco...and sensitive draco...sigh my perfect man...
i love him in this story...but not really until the um...later chapters...so keep writing!!!!!
ahh cant wait...haha
i love him in this story...but not really until the um...later chapters...so keep writing!!!!!
ahh cant wait...haha