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Yes, it was a wonderful chapter.
I\'m starting to seriously doubt whether I\'ll be able to somehow finish reading this story. It\'s been taken away from me too many times, huh?
Anyways, I keep looking for it. And yay! I found it again.

You\'re really great at writing the relation between the Malfoys.
They\'re a sick family, huh?
I\'ve said this maybe 100 times, but I\'ll say it again. I\'m not sure that that is the \"real\" way they behave, but you\'ve portrayed them so coherently that I\'ll buy it.
Poor Draco, however. First Lucius, now Narcissa. He was born to serve others. Ja.
I\'m starting to guess how our two heroes will be connected... and I\'m not liking it a bit. However, as I tell all my favorite authors: I\'ll trust you.
Great chapter!

Hello there darling! So I have finally ofund my way over to your lovely and intriguing story. First off, your Narcissa is fast becoming my favourite character in your writing, perhaps even more so than Lucius. I absolutly adore the characterization you bring to her that is all your own yet so right! And of course our noble and sexy Draco is fast approaching his fateful encounter! (My favourite scene really, the club scene, I am so looking forward to it!). Anyway I am so happy to see you have found a new home for your story and wish it the best of luck. I do hope your readers follow you!

Eagerly awaiting the next NEW chapter of It Had To Be You!!! I am a sucker for lemony fics! And you write that one so well. Well darling, once again, I am so happy you are still posting. Looking forward to more!!! OOOhhh just remembered the upcoming scene between our Heroine and a certain Harry Potter. I don\'t know if I have told you but that bit was just so nastily exhilarating. Mainly because no one should get to touch my Draco and at least Harry distracted her for a bit! lol. Ciao bella!

Love, Ally

Hi.
I really loved your portray of Draco Malfoy (except for one tiny bit I\'ll discuss later).
You\'ve given him a lot of depth and yet, kept him somewhat IN character. He\'s not a darling, but he\'s not THAT mean. Who would have thought Draco could be so self-conscious. Not in an ashamed way, but in a self-knowing way. He may be exaggerating, but I think his own image is 89% right (at least).
About the murder, I hope he doesn\'t do it, but as he says, if it is not him, some friend of Lucius\' will do it. How are you going to save them both???
Anyways, the part of his hm \"equipment\", I didn\'t really liked it because it felt a bit childish among this dark, mature, powerful mood. Just that.
See ya.

Oh! I read your mind!
Only last chapter I was wondering how you would solve Draco\'s dilemma and you\'ve started to solve it!
Will Narcissa kill Lucius?
Oh! I certainly hope so...ahem... but not for 3-4 chapters, please? He\'s yummie!

This chapter left me with a horribly desperate need to find out what happens next. I\'ve never read any part of this story before; I don\'t know what happens, and I am bursting with questions. It doesn\'t surprise me in the least that Harry is in danger, it\'s the fact that Draco has decided to save him! How is that going to come about? When does Laurel come back into the story? Don\'t get me wrong I LOVE Draco (sigh), but I\'m curious to see what happens with her. When is Narcissa going to rid the world of Lucius, and exactly how is she going to do it? I know...I know...you can\'t tell me what is going to happen, but DARN IT. This is so suspenseful, and apparently I don\'t deal with suspense well. Please update soon. I\'m dyin\' here. This is a wonderful story, but I don\'t want to be on the alert list. I like the feeling of surprise I get when I see an author has updated. :-)

P.S. If you update and I don\'t review it\'s because I\'m on Spring Break and I\'m at my parent\'s house. They won\'t let me relax and just chill out when I go to visit them, so I won\'t be able to get on the computer or do what I want for a couple of days.

Hasta luego
ALP

Holy cow !. I do believe i really like the last two chapters, better then the beginning so far. I surely hope you have some spectactular plans for Lucius, he really needs to have some payback. I really can\'t wait to see what Draco, and his mother have planned. Maybe Lucius, and Voldemort can get there paybacks at the same time. More Draco, praising himself please.

yea like i said at your other story i have been reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyy tired lately, halfly because i fell in love and i dont know what the other half is but i think im going to die im so depressed. great chapter, so as my usual sign off KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just got done with chapter 15! I love how Draco can make these detached little observations about himself and his behavior (narcissism issues...ha ha, loved it) and recognize his dysfunctional patterns, yet really doesn\'t do much about them! He maintains his arrogant, cocky, drop-dead sexy ways. Thank goodness! I wouldn\'t have him any other way! (Billy Joel song starts playing in the back of my head: \"Don\'t go changing, to try to please me...\")

Another round of Narcissa/Draco interaction that was absolutely wonderful! The best line: \"It was not a talking visit.\" Once again I felt bad for Draco having to hear about his parents\' sex life.

I can\'t believe I forgot to comment (in my review of 14) about Draco all naked and sad in his bed! That delicious image must have rendered me completely incapable of coherent thought, and as a result, I forgot to say \"Oh my poor sweet Draco, let me comfort you...no need to put on clothes...\" Ahem. Well, just had to let that random thought out.

Back on track to chapter 15: The last two sentences were AWESOME! Left me with that desperate cliffy feeling. I must have more now! And you are such a tease, Lorett dear! Slow dancing? Lemons? Kissing? Don\'t leave me hanging for long, hon. I don\'t know if I can be patient. Must have a Lorett-authored fan fic fix soon.....

PS: *hugging you and dancing around, too* Thanks for another 2-fur, sweetie! You really are so good to me!

Hiya Lorett!!!

How are you hunny?! Hopefully you\'re feeling a little less stressed now that your loyal and faitful readers have followed you to this site! And why wouldn\'t they?? You\'re an amazing writer! I just love your smooth, emotional writing style and I sooooooo wish that I could write as well as you can!

I\'m also loving your latest updates! Thanks for giving us a 2-fur! I came into University especially to read the chapters and I wasn\'t disapointed! You know I\'m in a crowded library with tons of people around making lots of noise, but when I was reading the chapters it just felt like I was the only one here since I was so engrossed in it all!!!

OOohhhh... yet more tension and excitement fills the air as we see Narcissa become her old powerful self! I wonder what she\'ll do to Lucius?!?! Well, whatever it is it\'ll be a long time coming! I do hope it\'s something particularly evil and before it happens I hope there\'ll be some banter between the two! I love the chemistry that they have together and I hope we\'ll see some more of it soon!

As for Draco... poor thing!!! He\'s dwelling on this murder thing quite a lot and it\'s understandable!!! Obviously! I still want to cradle him in my arms and tell him that everything is going to be alright! I wish I could do that! If I was in this story that\'s what I\'d do... then, of course, afterwards I\'d have my wicked way with him!!! Hee hee! Maybe theres room for a bit of an Annie charcter in your story???... I wonder what\'s going on with Harry?!? I am intrigued! Cliff-hangers are the bain of my life! I want to know what happens next!!! So please update soon!!!

Hope you\'re ok and that life is treating you well!
Lots of huggles
Annie.