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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Droppin\' a line for chapter 17! lol, Yes, I remember Tad and Teeny now...I also wish I had access to their plastic, lol....I\'m so broke.
Haha, ok, I\'m gone to the next chappie!
Haha, ok, I\'m gone to the next chappie!
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dancing with you* lol, I had my wisdom teeth taken out, so I was out for a few days, but I AM BACK!! *looks around, too* I like it here. The review pages could be a little more structured, in my opinion, but otherwise, it\'s good. I actually stumbled on this place a while back, so I\'m used to the layout and such, but I had NO IDEA that you were here, too! lol, Hey, since you don\'t get emails when we review, it\'s more of a surprise when you see ALL the new ones! hehe..
Yes, I am getting the updates! *grin* I see the subject line CHAPTER UPDATE, and I get all excited....and then whaddaya know, I click and there\'s THREE chapters at once!! I thought Christmas came early this year, I was so FRICKEN happy!!! lol, I am on the It Had To Be You update list too, yes? Just wanna make sure, haha. I\'m looking forward to the next chappies!
Toodles, love!
P.S. Did I mention how much I LOVE your stories, and that you\'re a wicked awesome writer? Just wanted to make sure I did, lol...
Yes, I am getting the updates! *grin* I see the subject line CHAPTER UPDATE, and I get all excited....and then whaddaya know, I click and there\'s THREE chapters at once!! I thought Christmas came early this year, I was so FRICKEN happy!!! lol, I am on the It Had To Be You update list too, yes? Just wanna make sure, haha. I\'m looking forward to the next chappies!
Toodles, love!
P.S. Did I mention how much I LOVE your stories, and that you\'re a wicked awesome writer? Just wanted to make sure I did, lol...
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t stay long tonight love! The man and I are doing movie night...yay! so, I must say that I adore these past chapters...You already know I do though. Can\'t wait for the club fun to really begin. Mucho love and hugs to you my dearest! Love, M
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, goodie. Finally got to read the fabulous chapter after a REALLY LONG BREAK (why do my parents insist in kicking me off the computer?? Especially when it\'s your fic....sob)!! Yay!! I can definitely see why this was one of your favorites....you wrote the frustration, suspicion, and drama really well. Their characters are so perfect in this scene; the chemistry between them makes it really enjoyable to read. The thick-headedness of Ron and Harry made me laugh. Those boys. Letting the past get in the way of the future. The sad thing is, everyone does it (some not QUITE so transparently) at one point, and it can cost lives. In this case, of course, it would mean the downfall of the Good Guys.
What I found really impressive was the way the Draco swallowed his pride to warn the two of them. It was depicted so subtly and (odd as the circumstances are) beautifully. Pride is the weakest point of our darling Malfoy, and it reigns just as strongly in Harry. Maybe that\'s what makes the drama between the two of them so intense. Really, if you think about it, they
What I found really impressive was the way the Draco swallowed his pride to warn the two of them. It was depicted so subtly and (odd as the circumstances are) beautifully. Pride is the weakest point of our darling Malfoy, and it reigns just as strongly in Harry. Maybe that\'s what makes the drama between the two of them so intense. Really, if you think about it, they
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey-a!!
I decided since you were so kind to give us a three-fur, I might as well review every chapter!! Ah, but they will be a bit shorter...hope you don\'t mind TOO much. Sigh. These review things take so long to write sometimes.....and I\'m such a slow writer. Gr...that\'s why Puppet Master is so long in coming.
Okay. Back to you. Draco is soooo sexy as a contemplative, subtle hero. I mean, he has STYLE. And that was a brilliant tie-in to the Goblet of Fire. You\'re now going to FORCE me to read back over that scene. Hmph. How dare you make you read over J.K. Rowling\'s fabulous writing!!! Yahhh!! Whew. Sorry. Had brownies for breakfast (they were GOOD too). I was a bit confused over Potter\'s Secret Weapon, though. The one line that I didn\'t quite understand was the one that went: \"Besides
I decided since you were so kind to give us a three-fur, I might as well review every chapter!! Ah, but they will be a bit shorter...hope you don\'t mind TOO much. Sigh. These review things take so long to write sometimes.....and I\'m such a slow writer. Gr...that\'s why Puppet Master is so long in coming.
Okay. Back to you. Draco is soooo sexy as a contemplative, subtle hero. I mean, he has STYLE. And that was a brilliant tie-in to the Goblet of Fire. You\'re now going to FORCE me to read back over that scene. Hmph. How dare you make you read over J.K. Rowling\'s fabulous writing!!! Yahhh!! Whew. Sorry. Had brownies for breakfast (they were GOOD too). I was a bit confused over Potter\'s Secret Weapon, though. The one line that I didn\'t quite understand was the one that went: \"Besides
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello hello hello....AGAIN!!
Ah, I\'m most definitely glad that you\'re putting all three chapters together. I would have killed you for making me really really really want to read this next chapter (which sounds so good) and then not have posted it. Man, it was hard enough taking the time out for a review before rushing off to the next chapter. I\'m really excited for it!!! Top 3? Really? Wow!!
I love Tad and Teeney. They seem the kind of people who you can\'t say one name without saying the others. You know, the kind of TadandTeeney (or simply The Twins!) effect. One name for the both of them. I thought you designed their character(s) really well, too. Just snobby enough to be annoying, just having enough connections to force you to withstand their very preppy company. I know so many kids like that. And the thing is...the two haven\'t even talked yet!! Not a single word. It makes your writing that much more enjoyable when you can give the idea of a character before you have any real contact with them. I mean, you often take the time out to give some background about them, but you don\'t stray too far to set their personalities in stone. Leaves the reader a little room to imagine. Personally, I try to just insintuate the characters, let the personalities show through their actions and words, but with you...you make it an enjoyable read. Tres, tres bon. Mark of a good writer.
I love the scenes between members of Laurel\'s family. They\'re blunt, but they really do give the idea of a happy American family. I can\'t help but draw parallels to my own family (just replace Willow with an eleven-year-old brother), and can imagine the dialogue so vividly. It\'s nice to have splashes of Muggle culture in there, to relieve the dark magical world that you capture so perfectly.
Right.....Chappie 18 ho!! Love you, darling. And this brilliant bit of Fan Fiction. (You wouldn\'t mine putting me on the Had to Be You update list, would you? I\'ll go give it a read reeally soon.)
Love,
Me.
Ah, I\'m most definitely glad that you\'re putting all three chapters together. I would have killed you for making me really really really want to read this next chapter (which sounds so good) and then not have posted it. Man, it was hard enough taking the time out for a review before rushing off to the next chapter. I\'m really excited for it!!! Top 3? Really? Wow!!
I love Tad and Teeney. They seem the kind of people who you can\'t say one name without saying the others. You know, the kind of TadandTeeney (or simply The Twins!) effect. One name for the both of them. I thought you designed their character(s) really well, too. Just snobby enough to be annoying, just having enough connections to force you to withstand their very preppy company. I know so many kids like that. And the thing is...the two haven\'t even talked yet!! Not a single word. It makes your writing that much more enjoyable when you can give the idea of a character before you have any real contact with them. I mean, you often take the time out to give some background about them, but you don\'t stray too far to set their personalities in stone. Leaves the reader a little room to imagine. Personally, I try to just insintuate the characters, let the personalities show through their actions and words, but with you...you make it an enjoyable read. Tres, tres bon. Mark of a good writer.
I love the scenes between members of Laurel\'s family. They\'re blunt, but they really do give the idea of a happy American family. I can\'t help but draw parallels to my own family (just replace Willow with an eleven-year-old brother), and can imagine the dialogue so vividly. It\'s nice to have splashes of Muggle culture in there, to relieve the dark magical world that you capture so perfectly.
Right.....Chappie 18 ho!! Love you, darling. And this brilliant bit of Fan Fiction. (You wouldn\'t mine putting me on the Had to Be You update list, would you? I\'ll go give it a read reeally soon.)
Love,
Me.
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry I can\'t review after every chapter, I have to read everything first. I love it, I can\'t say enough about it. It\'s brilliant, captivating, sexy, intriguing, funny, etc, etc. I look forward to reading more.
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. *HUGE GRIN*
You soo make me laugh. It is indeed like in \"the old days\". I don\'t only read your storie (and Ally\'s) but I also love to read your reviews to \"A Reason\", Alison\'s reviews to \"The Three Keys\", Ally\'s reviews to \"The Three Keys\", etc. I love your story, but I think your A/N add something really special to it. Being acknowledged as a reviewer does encourage us to do so. I do love to review and any opinion I may have on your writing, I\'m sorry but I\'ll tell it to you: good or bad. As ever, never meaning to hurt your so-very-much-appreciated feelings. I hope I\'m pulling it off nicely.
On to the review:
I liked the scene when Harry and Ron enter the bar. It made me think of Ben Affleck / Matt Damon, Gael Garc
You soo make me laugh. It is indeed like in \"the old days\". I don\'t only read your storie (and Ally\'s) but I also love to read your reviews to \"A Reason\", Alison\'s reviews to \"The Three Keys\", Ally\'s reviews to \"The Three Keys\", etc. I love your story, but I think your A/N add something really special to it. Being acknowledged as a reviewer does encourage us to do so. I do love to review and any opinion I may have on your writing, I\'m sorry but I\'ll tell it to you: good or bad. As ever, never meaning to hurt your so-very-much-appreciated feelings. I hope I\'m pulling it off nicely.
On to the review:
I liked the scene when Harry and Ron enter the bar. It made me think of Ben Affleck / Matt Damon, Gael Garc
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha! yea more lke late night text messages! haha im back to my normal self! HAHA!!!!!!!!!!! im going home tomarrow! im so excited! its my dads birthday and the cousins i NEVER get to see are coming over! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! omg did you know that exactly a year ago today one of Spain\'s really big trains blew up because of tererists (i probibly mispelled a lot of words already. for some odd reason i can\'t seem to spell...)?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? i found that really odd that the tererists attacted on the 11th 2 times. hmmmmmmm thinking thinking thinking. my god im rambling about nothing again! oh well. i wonder how my boyfriend can stand me hehehe im hyper im sugar high! YAY SUGAR HIGHNESS! omg i actually get to sleep in tomarrow GASP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im so happy! ive been trying to fix the first chapter on my story because it stunk so now its much better but i havent finished it yet too busy too busy too busy busy busy me! haha my favorite shows on tonight but its kinda a kid show and its kinda not a kid show... its got bipolor people in it! excuse me A bipolor PERSON and this girl she got........ AH HA! you thought i was going to tell you didnt you???? you want to know what happens! WELL IM NOT TELLING *sticks out tungue like a 2 yr old would* NAH NAH NAH NAH NAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg i thought i was going to DIE of bordom today. GAH i almost did. hey i read this really corny joke in a joke book once and it said, \"im writing this letter slowly because i know you can\'t read fast\" HAHA that one still cracks mew up. hey right now im writing and talking really fast can you talk really fast? i can talk really fast! my mouth moves at the speed of light! hahahahhahahahahaha GREAT CHAPTER KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lorett my dear, your wish has been granted!!! (Hee hee sounded like the fairy godmother from Cinderella then!!) I will leave you three reviews! One for each chapter! YAY!!!
I love contemplative Draco too! He soooooo loves himself and I love that! I don\'t know why but I\'m always attracted to men like that even though it usually ends up with me getting hurt! It\'s the bad boy syndrome I think! I just can\'t help myself!!! You\'ve been very clever intertwining (<---look at that snazzy word!) the other HP stories with your own! It makes perfect sense to me that Draco would do that since anyone at the age of 14 would be scared of what happened at the Quidditch World Cup. Very Inventive, and I commend you for your original thoughts!!! Hee hee! I\'ve gone all posh!
Anyway I\'m off to read and review the next chapter....
Annie.
I love contemplative Draco too! He soooooo loves himself and I love that! I don\'t know why but I\'m always attracted to men like that even though it usually ends up with me getting hurt! It\'s the bad boy syndrome I think! I just can\'t help myself!!! You\'ve been very clever intertwining (<---look at that snazzy word!) the other HP stories with your own! It makes perfect sense to me that Draco would do that since anyone at the age of 14 would be scared of what happened at the Quidditch World Cup. Very Inventive, and I commend you for your original thoughts!!! Hee hee! I\'ve gone all posh!
Anyway I\'m off to read and review the next chapter....
Annie.