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for The Three Keys

by lorettcopeland

person Annie
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya Loretta!

How are you hun? Good I hope! I\'m glad that our reviews kept you writing because you definitely shouldn\'t stop just because of what stupid FF.net did!!! You\'re stories are too good to let them just slip away!!! I love them!

*sighs* Oh the fluffy meltyness of Draco!!! I love it so! I was looking forwards to reading the chapters of him meeting Laurel again because I always imagine myself to be Laurel! I would love it if someone, who is as sexy and smooth as Draco, came up to me in a nightclub! That would just be a dream come true!!!!

Sorry I can\'t leave you a long review like usual. I have to go and catch a bus home or I\'ll be waiting for another 30 minutes! I promise to make up for it I\'ll leave an extra long review the next time!!!

Huggles and smooches

Annie (Twinkle Toes!)
person Dracosgal
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh the joy of young love. Laurel that lucky, lucky, lucky girl. Well, maybe NOT that lucky she\'s gone through a lot of crap, but still she gets Draco in the end so that more than makes up for her troubles. She WILL get Draco in the END RIGHT? Of course she will! So, I\'ll revert back to my previous statement; that lucky, lucky, lucky girl.

Well, yuo know the next upcoming chapters are my most favorite....especially the *ahem* bathroom scene. *blushing* just thinking about it. I forget how you made me - an avid Harry hater fall head over heels for him too, not to mention Blaise and I think I\'m harboring a slight crush on Ron and Lucius. YOu just write all your men so damn well.

Well with that I\'m out. I think you\'ll update tonight right? So I get to see more of Draco in all his glory.

love u - M
person HarryLuv2
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i\'m finally here! don\'t think i forgot about you, i\'ve been so damn crazy with work and life, but i would nvr, evr, abandon you and this amazing fict! i just caught up to my most fav part of the story so far. can\'t wait for draco and laurel to be together. ok, i\'m off to the next chapter. miss you loads! luvr2
person Huked on Fonix
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this!! lol, ok, off to read chapter 20!
person HarryLuvr2
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i forgot how much i like the meeting of draco from lauerl\'s view. she\'s just so totally into him that it takes my breath away right along with her. good job as always. oh yea, and don\'t you dare quit writing, i would have been so upset if you stopped your stories. i love ya mucho and i\'m off to re-read your other one just for good measure too. kisses, luvr2!
person Huked on Fonix
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the two perspectives...second time around, even better, lol! Yes, I completely agree with you about TNT...you name it, I wish I had it, lol. That Teeny, though...can be kind of a witch with a b if you ask me, haha. And I LOVE your writing!! I have yet to find anyone else that\'s good enough to spend time reviewing for EVERY chapter. Sure, I\'ll drop a note here and there, but you\'re still the only regular! You deserve it!

A rose for you, love! I\'m looking forward to more!
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person princessgreta
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg the chapter with ron and harry and draco in it was so damn hot! i could just imagine them standing by the bar, all sexy and smouldering without even realising it (except for Draco of course!) . Laurel is so damn lucky! But i love her because she\'s so strong! But the hottest has to be Draco, he\'s so uninterested in everything that it\'s truly sexy!
can\'t wait for the next chapter :)
xxprincessgretaxx
person RahNee
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Is it hot in here? *fans self* Chapter 19...has led me to a discovery. As much as I like Draco, I am also starting to enjoy Draco and Harry together. Those two hotties in one chapter? *Heart beats a little faster* (Oh, and Ron, too, although I\'ve never considered him a hottie until now. But if anyone can make him into a hottie, it\'s you Lorett, with all the talent you have. I wouldn\'t be surprised if you have me swooning over Ron in no time!!!) But lest you think I am as pervy as Teeny, I would only consider snuggling with them one at a time! Oh that \"dangerously handsome trio\"...*runs out in my new Vera Wang dress to join the girls prowlng in front of them* Which leads me to favorite line #1: that the number of girls pacing in front of the trio did not pick up until Draco joined them. I laughed at Draco\'s conceit! But what a picture they would have made; the blond, the red head and the brunet hotties leaning on the bar. Now, where was that fan I was using?

Fav #2: \"I\'m handsome, wealthy, charming, women love me...they can\'t help it.\" Heaven help me, but it\'s true!

Fav #3: \"We need to discuss your sleeping arrangements, Potter.\" \"Sorry Malfoy, you\'re not my type.\" \"Ugh. Manners, Potter, please...\" This is the witty banter that I so love! I am enjoying how you write Harry and Draco together! They are sharp, quick with the reply, and it is fantastic! I think they have all the makings of a respectful friendship someday. It reminds me a bit of the raport between me and my dearest friend (whom I\'ve known since 2nd Grade!). We are often snarking at each other and trading little barbs, but we team up instantly when a 3rd party comes into the picture (kind of like what Harry and Draco did when Teeny asked him to dance).

Fav #4: not a line per se, but I think it is hilarious that Draco drops his dislike of Muggles merely because there are scads of beautiful muggle women surrounding him. That\'s my boy! Thinking with those hormones!

Well, love, I\'m off to Chapter 20! Hugs and smooches to you, my darling!
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh sry i didnt review last time!!!! but omg these are by far my fav chapters...thats just something i would do haha...although using another guy to get the really hot one is really bad...eh eho cares right? but i can so see them standing at the bar...sigh
person Erin
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh yea that last review about them standing at the bar and me using another guy? yea that was me sry forgot to put the name!!! but omg keep updating...it just gets better!!! and we\'re almost...ewll kinda almost...to where we left off!!