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OMG I FORGOT TO SAY SOMETHING BEFORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GASP!!!!!!! haha ur chapters called hate to say i told u so but i LOVE to say i told u so. HAHAHAAHAHAHAHA! ok srz. TTYL!

You know for someone who really doesn\'t want to be a hero, Draco is acting too much like one. I was really hoping he would listen to laurel, but I guess he\'s too much of a stubborn man. I thought it was cute for both Harry and Draco to fret over laurel. I can\'t wait for your next chapter, your story is really amazing.

THIS IS ONE OF MY MOST FAVORITE CHAPTERS! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE DRACO IN THIS CHAPTER. HE\'S SO DAMN SEXY WHEN HE\'S ALL IN CONTROL AND BOSSY! GAWLLLLL!

Isn\'t it funny how crushes almost never work out the way you want them to? I mean look at poor Laurel and the way things turned out with Don. I\'m going to cruise through the next few chapters since I want to read at least part of this story that I haven\'t read before. Now that I\'m coming back to it after so long, I\'m sorta looking forward to the meeting between Laurel and Draco.

I looking forward to the meeting between Laurel and Harry, too, actually, if Harry is what attracted her to Don in the first place.
Argh-REALLY? What is with these stupid Death Eater type people, always doing stupid, immoral things?
Yes, but I\'m looking forward to Laurel meeting Harry and Draco and...SNAPE actually, hahaha. Can you turn this into a Snape story? Pretty please? Can I see HIM naked instead?

Jeez...what a messy breakup. I\'ve had a few like that myself. Well, not really, but sort of close.
It was good to have this chapter so violent and extreme. It really helps readers get to know Laurel better, really know her. Know that she\'s clever under pressure, and will stoop to any level to survive.

Hey! I have a Lovers Curse in my Snape story as well! It has some shitty effects too! Not as draining yours though. Actually, yes, just as draining, but a little slower and quieter. Anyway, get better, Laurel! It\'s time to go to Hogwarts and have sex with Draco! And Harry, right? I\'m looking forward to your Harry. For some reason, I really like reading about Harry as a supporting character in fanfiction. He can be so good that way. I wonder if I\'ll like your Harry.

Okay my darling...now we are getting to the good stuff! The club scene to end all club scenes. I love the overprotectivness of Draco here and the way he and Harry just seem to work together so perfectly. From all your hints and future chapters, I have gathered that Laurel, Draco and Harry are the three keys..obvious I know, but the whole soul thing is really intriguing. I am thinking they share a soul or a similar soul and well with the bonding that Harry and Draco will be doing in the future, you know that crazy scene where they link and well almost I dunno...kiss! Well needless to say each chapter makes me remember something from the others and makes me really want the next update!!! I want that bathroom scene!!!!!! You know it is my favourite. Oh poor Draco!!!! Sexy Lucius strikes again.

Hmmm Oh I remember. I started reading Deconstrust, A Memoir and well, hmm I am still reading it if that is an indication. It is written well and in a very different style, and though her charcters seem way to old for 14, the story really is starting to intrigue me. Needless to say i would go for your Draco or Narcissa and Lucius any day!!!

Well, I could ramble on all day here my darling, but I think I did plenty of that in the one million e-mails I sent you!!!! Crazy, I know. Will chat with you later.

Love, Ally

Jeez. I have no idea how you can stand to write about Voldemort for that long. My Voldemorts all die nearly as soon as you see them. Just can\'t stand them. Haha..that also means you have the patience to write more about Draco. Patience, who are we kidding.

I just thought it was so great the way you explained his smallness as being Lucius\' fault. But then again, everything\'s Lucius\' fault.
It\'s so great, too-this whole chapter is just Draco in his room, thinking and being resentful. You know it makes me smile. I like it.
Anyway, way to say, \"dammit! Time to move on from canon Draco! If we blame all on Lucius, we can get on to sexy, perfect, controlled Draco!\"
And Here-I\'m not making fun when I say this-parents do shape their kids. Almost completely. Draco\'s just lucky he had enough of a brain to resent his dad and become his own person.