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ohhhh! i feel bad now. :( only I\'M alowed to feel like crap! BWA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! no but really cheer up or i\'ll cry. nope to late. i need you to be happy! it makes me feel better knowing that you feel good, and unlike some people, when one person is sad or feels crappy, i feel sad or feel crappy, and if one person is happy or feels good, i feel happy and good! so your not alowed to feel bad. *pouts*. so.....

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SMILE! this IS the happy hour!

ohhhh! i feel bad now. :( only I\'M alowed to feel like crap! BWA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! no but really cheer up or i\'ll cry. nope to late. i need you to be happy! it makes me feel better knowing that you feel good, and unlike some people, when one person is sad or feels crappy, i feel sad or feel crappy, and if one person is happy or feels good, i feel happy and good! so your not alowed to feel bad. *pouts*. so.....

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SMILE! this IS the happy hour!

Okay darling, this will be a super short review. Why you ask? Because I refuse to make ANY comments until you give us the next chapter. I WANT THE BATHROOM SCENE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We got a deal then? You give Ally bathroom scene, Ally give you glowing review!!! Good, knew you would understand.

Oh also, means a lot that you mentioned me in It had To Be You! You know I love you and am also so happy we managed to find each other in this infinte space!

Love ya deary!
Ally

Well...Draco finally got out of the house, where he sat around all day, thinking about Lucius and crying. Now he\'s sitting around for hours, thinking about Harry and even though I\'m happy to escape the crying, I sorta miss ol\' naked Draco.
Draco is all about subtlety, huh? I know that\'s not canon...but let\'s see...I guess when he FIRST went in to talk to Lucius, he was subtle in the way he slunk over to one side of the room so he could be in a better position but after that, he was pretty damn obvious about being t-ed off. But at the same time, it would have been nice, actually, if he were even LESS subtle and had just hauled off and punched Lucius. That would have been good.
Anyway...contemplative Draco is good, yes, but I\'m now ready for some action.

GOD do they finally meet in the next chapter?
Gee...again, I wonder if Draco and Laurel were meant to be together? Haha...she\'s already fallen (off her little vanity bench) for him so I guess so.
Laurel seems really bored being stuck around the house. She needs a hobby. Besides the piano.

\"What\'s his plan?\"
Hahaha...that line is so stupid, so funny, so frustratingly true. Those two can be such...what did you call them? Blithering idiots? Something like that, yes.
What I liked best about this chapter is the fact that before Draco even spoke to Harry and Ron, he was reassessing the way he thought of them. He thought they turned out pretty well in Muggle clothing. I like that he\'s able to change his mind not just about the whole blood and loyaltly issue but change his mind about how he perceives Harry and Ron too.
Good point about Harry thinking clearly under pressure. He doesn\'t always think clearly when he\'s angry...or is does he become angry because he doesn\'t always think clearly (I dunno, look at book five)? BUT his brain always manages to get him to do the right things in challenging situations.

No, no...I wouldn\'t blame Draco for being hormonal. He obviously comes from a very hormonal family. He can\'t help it.
The conversation between Harry and Draco in this chapter was really STRANGE! It was weird the way they just wouldn\'t say anything for a long time while they checked Laurel out. That\'s how friends behave, holding off conversation to check people out, not whatever the hell they are. I know they\'re not enemies or anything, but they were having a very serious conversation. I\'d blame it on Laurel\'s being very distracting, but their attention seemed to sometimes be wholy on her, sometimes completely on the topic on hand.
Anyway...classic Draco line here:

Wow. So she didn\'t even NOTICE Harry? Harry, the reason she got herself mixed up with someone like Don to begin with?
Anyway...yay for a good dancer. That\'s one thing I like about Laurel that Hermione probably doesn\'t have.
Good chapter. It was just weird that she didn\'t notice Harry.

Hmm...my favorite part? Hum...I guess the part where Draco is looking at Tad so angrily. I mean...he was totally into Laurel\'s hips moving against his and then, all of a sudden, he gets himself distracted by some Muggle guy who\'s on the other side of the club? He\'s a little vengeful, isn\'t he?
Oh...I just remembered from a couple chapters back...the guy fondling Draco\'s ass. Haha. That was weird and kind of funny. Haha...just imagine, some Muggle grabbing Draco\'s ass. hahahaha...does it happen often? Jeez...that\'s really funny all of a sudden.
You know what I just thought? What if SNAPE got that sort of attention!? HAHAHA! Goodness.
Really, what made you think of that when you wrote it?

Harry Potter is so cute too. Besides the whole skinny thing. But green eyes and black hair...mm...really hot. Hotter than blond and blue...but Draco\'s coloring is too unusual to fit into the usual blond and blue category.
When the heck are they gonna get out of this club? Wouldn\'t the pounding music be bothering them by now?
I like that Draco tried to call them friends. I can just imagine him choking on the word.