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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Lorett,
Thousands of hugs for the lovely shoutout!, and yes i\'d love to be added to your chapter update thingy! (email address above) The wrist is healing nicely thank you, couldnt get my hands on a bottle of skelegro anywhere, not for the lack of Owls to Madam Pomfrey. Anyway glad you are feeling a tad better, stay safe and well, and a big red headed hug back to you ( im a red head too! )
Silverdragon
p.s Did i mention im going to London this weekend and I\'m taking you with me! (storywise not personally im afraid) may look for the platform 9 3/4 whilst im there LOL
Thousands of hugs for the lovely shoutout!, and yes i\'d love to be added to your chapter update thingy! (email address above) The wrist is healing nicely thank you, couldnt get my hands on a bottle of skelegro anywhere, not for the lack of Owls to Madam Pomfrey. Anyway glad you are feeling a tad better, stay safe and well, and a big red headed hug back to you ( im a red head too! )
Silverdragon
p.s Did i mention im going to London this weekend and I\'m taking you with me! (storywise not personally im afraid) may look for the platform 9 3/4 whilst im there LOL
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YOU, DAMN YOU, DAMN YOU!!!!! Have I not told you enough times that I read your stories at the OFFICE??? What do you think that watery-eyes, flushed-cheeks, hands-covering-mouth, drool-slipping-through-fingers and fast breathing do to my reputation?? We\'ve got GLASS WALLS here, for crying out loud!!!!!!
Jiji. Anyways. What can I say?? GREAT chapter. I am in love with Harry (have been for a while, but even more now). He is just so marvelous. So sexy. I can\'t stand his goodness. Such a fine man. I\'d love to be Laurel, able to look into his soul and able to let herself go like that with him, no questions asked. Built forearms... one of my preferred treats. And when he pulls her hand into his pants...........................................................................OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!! Just sooo fabulous!!!!! I just love that kind of man. So sweet and tender and strong and pro-active. Yummie! You\'ve just got to give him beautiful, long, thin hands and I\'ll be lost forever in his image.
You say he\'s getting his fun too, even if it\'s not with Laurel....mmh....and I was kind of wondering.... could it be .... possible... that he had ...hmm... all this fun you say he\'s going to have..... with.....mmmh....MEEEEEE??????? PLEASE?????
I guess not. Damn.
You wrote a very, very nice chapter. It had a wonderful rythm. You skipped no description, but everything was described so fast, that my heartbeat really went berserk. I could picture everything in my mind and believe me, it got out of hand as well.
I also have to say that though most people might find that interruption annoying, I loved it. I mean, who has never been interrupted when in such a situation? We all have been, I\'m sure. So, it\'s easy to relate to it. And to the crave, urge (arrghh!!! I\'m not good at words!!!) that follows. The tension it leaves. Oh, god! I must get myself a cool, gigantic glass of water. Hope it helps....
Jiji. Anyways. What can I say?? GREAT chapter. I am in love with Harry (have been for a while, but even more now). He is just so marvelous. So sexy. I can\'t stand his goodness. Such a fine man. I\'d love to be Laurel, able to look into his soul and able to let herself go like that with him, no questions asked. Built forearms... one of my preferred treats. And when he pulls her hand into his pants...........................................................................OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!! Just sooo fabulous!!!!! I just love that kind of man. So sweet and tender and strong and pro-active. Yummie! You\'ve just got to give him beautiful, long, thin hands and I\'ll be lost forever in his image.
You say he\'s getting his fun too, even if it\'s not with Laurel....mmh....and I was kind of wondering.... could it be .... possible... that he had ...hmm... all this fun you say he\'s going to have..... with.....mmmh....MEEEEEE??????? PLEASE?????
I guess not. Damn.
You wrote a very, very nice chapter. It had a wonderful rythm. You skipped no description, but everything was described so fast, that my heartbeat really went berserk. I could picture everything in my mind and believe me, it got out of hand as well.
I also have to say that though most people might find that interruption annoying, I loved it. I mean, who has never been interrupted when in such a situation? We all have been, I\'m sure. So, it\'s easy to relate to it. And to the crave, urge (arrghh!!! I\'m not good at words!!!) that follows. The tension it leaves. Oh, god! I must get myself a cool, gigantic glass of water. Hope it helps....
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Hugs!* I AM enjoying it this time around! lol, but I do have to say, I\'m waiting for some sexified Draco/Laurel action here.. Now THAT would be sexy as all get-out! *grin* I can\'t wait for some Delectable Drool-Inducing Draco!! *hee hee!*
*HUGE GRIN!* I remember this chapter (25) VERY well!! How could I forget it?! It\'s the BATHROOM SCENE! That\'s just something you CAN\'T forget.....Mmm, all the Hunky Hottness of Harry... hmm, I may just need a cold shower now, lol!
Hugs! And I hope you get rid of that nasty cough soon! Toodles!
*HUGE GRIN!* I remember this chapter (25) VERY well!! How could I forget it?! It\'s the BATHROOM SCENE! That\'s just something you CAN\'T forget.....Mmm, all the Hunky Hottness of Harry... hmm, I may just need a cold shower now, lol!
Hugs! And I hope you get rid of that nasty cough soon! Toodles!
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooo, i do adore harry! poor him *gives harry a huge hug* he\'s so cutie innocent!! just so long as he does get with someone then that is ok, i couldn\'t bear it if draco got laurel (as much as she can be \'got\' anyway cos she\'s not exactly likely to be owned by any guy, even the gorgeous draco) and harry was left all on his lonesome even though his eyes are gorgeous and his soul is pure!!! sorry, i get a bit carried away....
well seeing as i\'m reading through each chapter for the first time, i am going to have to tell you how much this story makes me happy!! every time the chapter ends i think something along the lines of NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. which isn\'t a great feeling i can tell you.
every single character is so perfect, so well mapped out and described but in such a subtle way. i can\'t stand it when people just describe each character in one go but you gradually feed the information throughout the chapters. perfect. and all those little details. like in the latest chapter where ron interupts harry and laurel. i could just imagine his ears going bright red and then stomping away!! (bless him)
so there you have it, all my love for your amazing fanfiction in a couple of paragraphs! i really hope that you feel better soon so hugs from me (it isn\'t contagious is it?!) lol, just kidding (but seriously??)
tee hee hee
xx princessgreta xx
well seeing as i\'m reading through each chapter for the first time, i am going to have to tell you how much this story makes me happy!! every time the chapter ends i think something along the lines of NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. which isn\'t a great feeling i can tell you.
every single character is so perfect, so well mapped out and described but in such a subtle way. i can\'t stand it when people just describe each character in one go but you gradually feed the information throughout the chapters. perfect. and all those little details. like in the latest chapter where ron interupts harry and laurel. i could just imagine his ears going bright red and then stomping away!! (bless him)
so there you have it, all my love for your amazing fanfiction in a couple of paragraphs! i really hope that you feel better soon so hugs from me (it isn\'t contagious is it?!) lol, just kidding (but seriously??)
tee hee hee
xx princessgreta xx
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of my favorite chapters. Soo good. Takes me back to my teen years. I can remember those hot and heavy make out sessions that almost led to more than it really should of. Wow, what great memories, wait a moment, got to take a minute............................................... Okay, I collected myself. I am so excited because the story is fast approaching one of the other favorite chapters I have for this story. Even if it is close to Shhhh(slash), but not really. Man is that chapter really, really, hot, did I mention, hot! Well glad to see you found a place to post that will let you have free reign over your story. I will be checking in. Love your work.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Dedicated to me! I am SO tired and will come back to review more fully later, but let me just say:
\"Set and ferocious\"
is a really hot way to describe Draco\'s eyes.
\"Set and ferocious\"
is a really hot way to describe Draco\'s eyes.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DARLING!! Running up to you and bodyslamming you in all my excitement and newly recovered strength!!!! AHHHHHHHH, god how I love this chapter. Odd, I know right, considering my love, obsession, borderline stalker fasination with our dear Draco, but you know what, you write
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
laurel not nervous because he\'s famous (harry ) is she.? she practicly knows nothing of draco except his eyes, and the little she\'s heard of the last name. getting ready to read next chapter, keep up the great story.
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. This is the first ever I\'ve read with an OC, I usually can\'t stand those. But this is terrific. You write very well and seemed to have developed quite an involved story. Can\'t wait to read more, so keep \'em coming.
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Stop playing with my brain, will you?
Harry, Draco or Ron? I can\'t make up my mind at this moment.
\"She wondered what Draco had that Harry didn\'t....\" Don\'t we all?
As of today, most of the fics I had read had portrayed a soft Harry. But yours is just sooo yummie! WHY is Laurel nervous to be alone with Green Eyes?????? I know I would. But then again, I know of some other things I would do too. Jejeje.
I loved this chapter for its speed. It was exciting to read! Though I had already told you that I wouldn\'t tolerate any love triangles... and this certainly looks like one. PLEASE! Update soon. PLEASE! Update soon.
Harry, Draco or Ron? I can\'t make up my mind at this moment.
\"She wondered what Draco had that Harry didn\'t....\" Don\'t we all?
As of today, most of the fics I had read had portrayed a soft Harry. But yours is just sooo yummie! WHY is Laurel nervous to be alone with Green Eyes?????? I know I would. But then again, I know of some other things I would do too. Jejeje.
I loved this chapter for its speed. It was exciting to read! Though I had already told you that I wouldn\'t tolerate any love triangles... and this certainly looks like one. PLEASE! Update soon. PLEASE! Update soon.